you need to explain what a boot is those of hits in America at least most of us do not know what that is we think it's a shoe that you wear on your foot I had to Google it to figure out what it was have a good day

"Sure guys, why don't you pull up your chairs to our table and we will help you out if you get (struckHarry gave them an easy way out while rooting for the said book in his bag.

I didn't know Harry was in the business of slapping people I don't get it?

a very minor tasks indeed your last sentence in this chapter made me laugh well done

I see you're making the dursleys out to be a more normal family I suppose that's cool although the books and movies shown to be a total jerks and there's no evidence saying there's any spells on the place that was causing it as they say you're the writer you have the poetic license and I like the way you're doing it I am genuinely curious about this story and I'm going to continue reading so far it's better than the books

OOps 1999

Since 1992 France doesn't use French francs anymore.

no hay problema there is no problem

But the Beauxbatons carriage and the Durmstrang ship had accommodations for each one's dozen students. They weren't put up in Hogwarts.

"emptions"?

The two visiting schools were not "all girls" or "all boys" like the movie portrayed. Each school in the book was described as having brought a dozen students each, and later in the book, Harry was even approached by Durmstrang girl, still later it was revealed each school had with them six boys, six girls.

Why didn't he think of turning his water skis into a Windsurfer? He then would have had small masted sail with a crossbar handle to hold onto?

Your Professor Snape is starting to remind me of Mr. Spock. A nice change. Do you think you could ever write a story crossover where this type Professor Snape meets Mr. Spock?

You should use "circumstance" in place of "instance" .

I don't know, let's see... Antivenin?

So, NO one thought of putting impervious charms on the tents to make them impervious to fire or attack of any kind? Then everyone would have been safe staying in the tents.