Reviews for With You by My Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter. gunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. gunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying this story. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks like a great story, looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really liking this story so far, however I cannot help but wonder why you used a feminine form rather than a masculine one when you had harry speak Spanish According to my Spanish lessons the proper sentence would be no problemo from a man as for the word hay I have never heard of it could you please explain? and for the record one of my instructors was from Spain and the other Mexico any way good spelling and grammar so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am happy to have followed a link to this enjoyable fic. 14 chapters in such a short period of time is a Herculean effort. Another reviewer mentioned that Harry should have transfigured a replica of he stone and exchanged it for the real one. I agree with this, especially since much of the work described in this fic is mainly on the thesis work they did on the conservation of matter. In addition to the other reviewer's comment, Hermione, due to her previeous efforts on the intricate details on her earlier copy of Harry's tea cup would have made an exact-looking copy of the stone once Harry took it out of the safe. After a bit of rest, she could have levitated Harry back up to the trap the original stone was placed and exchanged it for Harry's moneybag. It would have been an excellent sign of Hermione's future fiscal responsibility of the Potter wealth and Lady of the house. Yes, this act would have precluded the scans that Dumbles and the bat did on the kids but the alerting rune in Dumbles office could have lasted longer and after Dumbles investigations of all the traps would have noticed prof kitty's disenchanted chess pieces and acted as per your storyline without the suspicion of a fake stone. As for the pair not notifying the Flamels about the stone I feel that it is out of character for the both of them. Their explanations to each other not to seems rather weak to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That chapter was just so much fun, I enjoyed it a lot Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. gunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. gunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great how you had them to miss the hold Troll byplay Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a FANTASTIC story. Love the curve you introduced here. As well a minimizing Ron and to a lesser effect the Weasleys in general. Oh a suggestion include Luna in their small circle of friends simply because her view on Magic and nature should give them new ways to their scientific analysis! Plus she IS a fun character to write! Grand saga! dennisud |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great post Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start. gunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great post Until next time Gloria |