Reviews for With You by My Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your Harry, he's thinking out side the box! Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this shows why the Magical world is in such trouble. Dumbledore's praise of their work reflects back to Dumbledore and it is sad under his headmastership new ideas and innovations have whithered and died. Pity Harry did not transfigure a copy of the stone as it seem unlikely Dumbledore would even consider a swap. Then Dumbledore could have just carried on. But to admit to know of Quirrellmort and not remove him from the school like when he is asleep shows a complete disregard for the safety of the students. Dumbledore has lost it and should be removed from the school for it own protection. So when will Harry take out Quirrellmort? Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter going through to collect the stone but you forgot the big boulder to chase them through the spider webs. So how will they return the stone and when will Dumbledore come to check his traps? Will they question how dangerous it has been to all the children of a school to have the stone there when Harry was? Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! I'm enjoying this fic and hope it remains this uplifting and cheerful throughout! (don't like angsty stories). Keep up the great work and thanks for bring H.M.S. Harmony together early on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope they at least experiment with it or keep a small shard. I'm always a fan of them having elixir. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story looking forward to more. And I agree JKR blew it with Harry and Hermione even without the hero should get the heroess, Ron and Hermione are just too wrong for each other I know opposites attact in nature and every ones says that, but those two are just too far apart and He's caused her to much pain. And the fan-girl/fanatic/stalker getting the hero "I Loved him before I even met him" what planet is J.R. from. No Harry and Hermione were the two best suited for each other, Luna is better suited for Harry than Ginny. Ginny is more suited for someone like Justin. Ron better suited for, well not really sure who, Ron wants to be rich and a playboy basically. Sorry got carried away GOOD STOTY KEEP WRITING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having the teachers like McGonagall go back and redo her trap would also be good so that if and when Quirellmort goes for the stone he doesn't find out that it was already moved or he might also come to the conclusion that Potter and Granger got to the stone first. Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic fic. Can't wait for more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice new parts. Bet Ol' Nick will be happy with the two of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it is a little cheesy, and it's definitly odd for eleven year old to be thinking that far ahead into an actual adult relationship no matter how advanced they may be but I do hope you continue. |