Reviews for With You by My Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, I have really enjoyed what I've read so far, looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the first 12 chapters. Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story it is nice that Harry is smart as Hermione for a change and they can see that both did not have friends or a normal childhood |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story so far i hope that harry/hermione become immortal (studing the stone), end up combining magic and technolgy maybe even create items like in Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha (space-ships, energy to matter food/tech eg and even the s class focuses like reinforce) plz update asap XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, Please Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 12 Enjoying the redo with an intelligent Harry matching Hermione. Harry home life was loveless but not physically abusive. Harry meets Ronald first but is quickly bored by him. Meeting Hermione and Neville looking for the toad. Reading a book attracts Hermione and they hit it off holding hands before the sorting. Puts Draco in his place and does not not make an enemy of him nor a friend in Ronald. Surprisingly they are not in Ravenclaw but Gryffindor. Neville becomes close to the pair. Brilliant ides on the broom lesson and Harry is not the seeker. Ronald is abusive to Hermione and then demands Hermione write his assignment. With Harry's support Ronald is rejected while the others who are prepared to work join their study group. On Halloween Ronald abuses Hermione for showing how stupid he is but Harry is holding her hand and stops her running off to meet the troll. Their friendship grows and everyone accepts them as a couple. Interesting twist on Snape and Quirrellmort. Like the ideas for research and transfiguration but the feather light charm would seem to go against the size and mass concept. Dumbledore has already shown himself untrustworthy when he did not come clean about his involvement in dumping Harry at Durskaban and they need to get more information from Remus and others as to what is going on. So will Dumbledore drop more hints for Harry and Hermione to go after the stone? Will Hermione discover that Harry can inherit before 17? Knowing that Dumbledore interfered will Harry find out his parents wishes? Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story so far. Brilliantly done, I love the indepth look at what magic can do in your world. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Harry and Hermione do investigate Remus' illness one interesting approach might be the following: The transformation occures only during the full moon. We know that the condition does not manifest during daylight, but moonlight is only reflected sunlight. This means the condition only occurs within a narrow band of solar radiation. What would be the effect of artifical sun light such as in sun lamps? The basic question to be answered is what is the magical difference between sunlight and moonlight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your story. I have it on alert and have added it to my community Harry Fights Back. I am looking forward to further chapters. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this story. Harry and Hermione really compliment each other and not just intellectually, but as friends as regular friends as well (which all the physcal contact also leads into them being future lovers as well). I like how Harry stood up for Hermione in front of Ron both at whn he wanted her to do his essay for him and that Halloween insult. The publishing of their theories is the beginning I'm sure of many essays and books on different topics of magic. Maybe down the line, their books can be the new standard for Hogwarts ttextbooks. One problem I did have was when Harry nd Hermione met. There was no proper "Hi, I'm Hermione Granger. Hi, I'm Harry Potter" type of introduction. I suppose that may have been understood after their first intellectual conversation and before Hermione mentioned reading the fake books about Harry's childhood, but I can't say for sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this, and I hope you have more to put up soon! Love the Harmony, and application of mug-er- non-magical theory to magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice so far! |