Reviews for With You by My Side
Schnuff chapter 12 . 2/3/2012
so after 12 chapters lets see.

The first chapters are good. The endless research lessons are a little dull. Also the big question why Gryffindor?

(in one of my fav stories the Hat describes Gryffindor as *Canon fodder*) .

anyway i hope to read more soon ;-)̄̅̆̇̈̉
RobC chapter 5 . 2/3/2012
This is looking very good so far. And you seem to be foreshadowing Dumbles attempts to keep Harry ignorant by using Hagrid.
Schnuff chapter 8 . 2/3/2012
Very good and i like the changes you make (not boosting Harry's skill or near death wish)
Schnuff chapter 5 . 2/3/2012
YEAH

ok its childish but what can i say i real dislike Ron and see him at the same level as Draco
Schnuff chapter 4 . 2/3/2012
One of the reasons behind the many Dumbledore is an manipulative bas**** is the sending of Hagrid to introduce Harry to the magical world...so well done with this chapter
Schnuff chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
its getting better with an intellectual Harry
Schnuff chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
Good one.

I only hope that someone called Ron is completely out of this story
Schnuff chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Well done, always love to read about the background
pfeil chapter 12 . 2/3/2012
Brilliant work! I love the idea of them applying scientific method to magic, and the harmony sweetness is great as well, of course :)
Bobboky chapter 12 . 2/3/2012
very very good
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