Reviews for With You by My Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so after 12 chapters lets see. The first chapters are good. The endless research lessons are a little dull. Also the big question why Gryffindor? (in one of my fav stories the Hat describes Gryffindor as *Canon fodder*) . anyway i hope to read more soon ;-)̄̅̆̇̈̉ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is looking very good so far. And you seem to be foreshadowing Dumbles attempts to keep Harry ignorant by using Hagrid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good and i like the changes you make (not boosting Harry's skill or near death wish) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH ok its childish but what can i say i real dislike Ron and see him at the same level as Draco |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the reasons behind the many Dumbledore is an manipulative bas**** is the sending of Hagrid to introduce Harry to the magical world...so well done with this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() its getting better with an intellectual Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one. I only hope that someone called Ron is completely out of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done, always love to read about the background |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant work! I love the idea of them applying scientific method to magic, and the harmony sweetness is great as well, of course :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() very very good |