Excuse me, but Harry's 12th birthday is not for another month from this Hospital Wing scene.

If Voldie's wraith passed easily through the window, how could "he" smash the glass panes of aforementioned 't sound like an easy passing to me.)

Let Ronald Bilius Weasley be an object lesson. NEVER, Ever, give your child the name "Bilius"!

Harry knows the value of a true friend, so he's not going to do anything to take Her away from him or her away from him.

Hey! He may find he doesn't even need the backpack; he could just use his pouch for his class books, supplies and his wand!

"Dudley" household? Really?

why don't they look for ways to do magic at home so they can practice spells to attack and defend. for example a gringotts ward, or at least ask the goblins. I'm confused they are very relaxed after almost being killed

I vastly enjoyed this, however the ending just doesn’t seems right to me. Like there was no real climax.

using a 'finite incantatem' on a dense conjured block is a bomb. If you can enchant it to be remotely triggered or on a timer, it's lethal, especially if there's shrapnel enclosing it. THIS IS A SCARY IDEA, and I hope there's some limitation.

unbreakable fidelius. two people are each others secret keepers. for example; Lily potter was the secret keeper for the long bottoms, and alice longbottom was the secret keeper for the potters. both are under fideliused locations that only the other can reveal.

Why hasn’t she gotten a feather light bag yet?!

I laughed when Harry 'slipped' into Spanish and it turned out they're both fluent in French and Spanish and learning Latin. Laughed at, not with. Cos that was ridiculous.

A story written by professor Binns. Dry and boring.

Fudgepucker was hoisted on his own petard. I love it.

I'm sorry you forgot somthing super important uv light can be blocked