His daughter can ask her muggleborn boyfriend to take her last name or they can have a boy for the Jones family name to be preserved.

Should have also gotten a confession of passed deeds for reference.

Poor Severus. Used by a lot of people. I would hope he would find peace if not happiness in his life.

As the acknowledged Head of House Harry should be able to get his parents' Wills read. He should also now be able to enter the Family Vaults.

Nooooooooooooo! why? WHY? why would you put that lazy ass concept of magical core in the fic? WHY? that shit is taboo to any self respecting writer, so WHY?!

So not one of them could keep their wands on Crouch, Malfoy and Voldie?

I seem to be missing parts of the story? When did they get stopped from getting all the Boy Who Lived stuff from being removed...and last chapter when did they find out he could be Lord Potter if it wasn’t for Dumbledore?

Absolutely brilliant first year. So fun and curious. And I always adore a close friendship of my OTP in their early years. I know I'm going to love this story to bits.

Loved it. Such cuteness and so very clever together.

Awww, that was so adorable! Harry defending her immediately, the intelligent talk. Basically ignoring the walking trash disposal. Wish Harry had gone to help Neville too, but otherwise this chapter was practically perfect.

Loved reading their respective childhoods. The kind life with the Dursleys was also superb. The idea of Vernon smiling at Harry's enthusiasm really shows the change from canon. I'm still excited though, awaiting the meeting. It will really be something...

This is did a nice job of connecting the magical and non magical world's through science. I like the amount of detail included, the way the two main characters were intelligent, but not overly so, and I liked the way there was a strong bond between the students and professors. I am glad you included Snape in the team, and I also appreciated the fact that Dumbledore changed for the better. As for feedback, I would suggest that some the elaboration or background information is slightly shortened. But overall, this is a good story; it is well written and can be something most ages can read and understand, without coming across inappropriate material.
Please continue!

Dear Hugs:

Just thought I should mention: It ought to be "her arms and legs, which were scraped badly". You scrap a broken appliance; you scrape a knee.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Good

This was a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.