Reviews for With You by My Side
Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2020
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2020
Stille und regen chapter 24 . 8/9/2020
It is very interesting that the castle told more things. but you also made the hat realistic to say that their knowledge is limited to what was said in the castle
Stille und regen chapter 23 . 8/9/2020
hey, i love the changes!

I'm glad you didn't make Harry go through the terrible ostracism of the second year
Stille und regen chapter 22 . 8/9/2020
Filius' duel advice was great.

I found the remus letter very good

and the idea of the box to hold objects is very good

I'm excited
Stille und regen chapter 21 . 8/9/2020
the business idea is very interesting
I like the idea of being lupin involved too
moreover, it is very kind that children think in the first year. makes sense
good that colin is getting calmer in the presence of harry
Stille und regen chapter 20 . 8/9/2020
I like the flamel advice on electives

Harry and Hermione doing a report on the Lockart scam is also interesting.

it is horrible that nobody stopped the instruction to buy 7 defense books. not the director, nor the council.

the idea with veela stone as a detector and protection from magic is interesting
Stille und regen chapter 17 . 8/8/2020
I believe you approached the nobility well, a Gryffindor characteristic
moreover, it is necessary to build up the courage to enter a totally unknown world, especially when one did not have a pleasant experience in the previous school.

i like the interrogation of hermione and harry for the idiot dumbledore

the attitude "you are a child" irritates me, but we know that dumbledore's intention for harry is a sacrifice, that means being as lost as possible
Stille und regen chapter 13 . 8/8/2020
the jar filling with potion was smart

and they are really cute
Stille und regen chapter 11 . 8/8/2020
I love it
Stille und regen chapter 10 . 8/8/2020
All right
I actually laughed with Hagrid saying things and not realizing what he said. great photo, lmao.
I love how you make changes and you're very smart. like the burning cabin, since there were no early years to deliver dragons to caregivers.

and these kids arguing about whether it's better to hide the object with them is really naive and strangely cute. make me smile

I love all the rest of the discussion, beautiful and sweet story. great writing
Stille und regen chapter 9 . 8/8/2020
Harry's questions about the practical application of transfiguration are very interesting.

I love all the excitement and innovation, it was an interesting discussion
Stille und regen chapter 8 . 8/8/2020
Hello! I must say that I love the changes you are making in the history of the canon.

as well as the emotion of both with the study and the techniques of concentration and sport.

if I found out it was magic, I too would be mad with curiosity about the possibilities.

little neville is cute, i'm glad they don't bow to intimidators and find support in each other.

it was very kind of Harry to remember Hermione's parents, since she doesn't have an owl.

and I even gave a soft laugh when Harry didn't mind holding hands, as he was developing skills with the left. it's sweet, cute and funny.

I'm glad that the dursleys aren't shit for harry. is different.

great story and writing, i already love it
gginsc chapter 56 . 7/30/2020
Nice story. I like a smart Harry and Hermione. I think they became a couple too young, however.
gginsc chapter 13 . 7/27/2020
They are way too young for a relationship.
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