I thought Remus was helping them with their transfiguration task? But it didn’t happen.

Before she went to school, her Hermione was practicing the wand movements it’s a stick and almost was able to cast wandlessly now no more has been said about her doing this.
I wish she a bit more in the lead at something it always Harry taking the lead, needs more balance between them.

Great start, but it’s mum not mom

They’re literally 11. Boyfriend and girlfriend? Thinking about a future together? Jobs and kids? These are not things eleven year olds think about. Overall, the plot is great on this story, but the romance is questionable.

I may be misremembering but didn't MCG state earlier in the story that there was no way to measure for core size but you just had pomfrey perform that very feat.

I really wish you had saved the romance for later years. These are children.

There actually shouldn't be any issue for Harry pulling out the sword of Gryffindor even if he was in Ravenclaw.

I'm pretty sure many of the implicating legends behind the access to the sword are mere legends considering Harry had held all Prominent artifacts of other houses, the only thing differentiating the sword from the others is that Tom never got the sword since Hogwarts has declared him as not worthy since for someone to get help from Lady Hogwarts such as calling forth the sword is to have a noble purpose; Harry was given the sword of Gryffindor to perform a noble act such as saving the school from the machinations of Tom Riddle, It also goes to say that Lady Hogwarts had decided to put to rest the Basilisk since it was only being used to do bad things and further besmirched the name of a Founder.

He really ought to tell off the headmaster for speaking to him so familiarly. He calls the other students Miss or Mr., he should address Harry the same way. It's extremely unprofessional the way he speaks to him.

Love the use of Superman's parents names for the Flamels.

A wonderful story, well worth reading! I liked your alternative tournament tasks. I do wonder if Ron went into chess as a career. Did the twins follow their dream too? And what happened to Drako? With his father killing the minister, I would imagine his ranking in Slytherin would have dropped. I would have liked to see his posturing about that, and how he would have reacted to Harry actually being so much better than he in everything. Also glad you had Harry have kids. He deserves a loving large family!

You never clearly stated that Harry's human arm was healed. Yes they danced, and he danced with others, so it was, but I would think there would have been some exclamation from people about how he looked.

I was so sure his animagus spirit form would protect him. It wouldn't, by chance, be able to grow back an appendage? Well, here's hoping!

Usually, I would be quite miffed with the main couple being so young, but considering that they have itachi-levels of intelligence and maturity, I'll let it slide this time. Still though, I was honestly hoping the romance would only start at volume 3 but eh.

with the opening of this chapter I now have summer holiday sung by Cliff Richard rattling around my head

Phenomenal work, I’m so glad to have stumbled across this gem of a fic.

Hoping the best for you, and I just want to say thank you for the quality entertainment that your work has provided me with.