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It is very interesting that the castle told more things. but you also made the hat realistic to say that their knowledge is limited to what was said in the castle

hey, i love the changes!

I'm glad you didn't make Harry go through the terrible ostracism of the second year

Filius' duel advice was great.

I found the remus letter very good

and the idea of the box to hold objects is very good

I'm excited

the business idea is very interesting
I like the idea of being lupin involved too
moreover, it is very kind that children think in the first year. makes sense
good that colin is getting calmer in the presence of harry

I like the flamel advice on electives

Harry and Hermione doing a report on the Lockart scam is also interesting.

it is horrible that nobody stopped the instruction to buy 7 defense books. not the director, nor the council.

the idea with veela stone as a detector and protection from magic is interesting

I believe you approached the nobility well, a Gryffindor characteristic
moreover, it is necessary to build up the courage to enter a totally unknown world, especially when one did not have a pleasant experience in the previous school.

i like the interrogation of hermione and harry for the idiot dumbledore

the attitude "you are a child" irritates me, but we know that dumbledore's intention for harry is a sacrifice, that means being as lost as possible

the jar filling with potion was smart

and they are really cute