|Reviews for Falling From A Cloud|
| Sun Dragon Ra chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Oh my! This fanfic is so cute, yet sexy
Oh, Barnaby and Kotesu...
Anyways, good job! I like how a lot of people interpret the sash somewhere into Barnaby's life SOMEWHERE or SOMEHOW. I like how you portrayed it in a way that was not only "aww" but "ohhohoho " at the same time.
The emotional mess Barnaby is in too, perfect. A lot fanfIcs don't portray that to a T.
Now...I've only seen fan versions of Barnaby with his hair "wet" or a tossled mess, and I'm sure he does look cute. Especially for Kotetsu
This ff's ending is cute, but with shirt fics it leaves the audience on a good edge of our seats. This leaves our (fangirly) imagination to run wild for what continues after.