|Reviews for Take me|
| MyHeartsDesire chapter 4 . 8/21
Sweet. Baby. Jesus. That was just, wow. I applaude you and your skills you are one talented person. Well done.
| Lunatic Yaoi Fangirl chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
Holy mother of grail...MARRY ME! This is the most perfect, most brilliant, most sexiest, most magnificent Johnlock story I have ever read; it was beautifully written, the plot and smut so fizzing perfect and smexy, and just outstanding in every way. Keep up the brilliant work! Also, I love that you put Sherlock as dominant, I have been waiting forever for this kind of story! So thank you so so much 3
| Theredcountsakura chapter 4 . 7/11/2014
God, this was amazing.
| Booker10 chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
| VKMP chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
| Puggle chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
Thanks for sharing
| ising4life chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
Love this story!
| Petrichor503 chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
Omg! This was amazing :D please please please write more !
| MyFirstistheFourth chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
Oh! Mah! Gawd! There be some smut that makes my toes curl and my spine tingle! Practically the whole past two and a half chapters worth! Honestly LOVED it! :-D :-D I read plenty of stories with s/m or bdsm and dom/sub. I don't always go for it either when it is too cruel and controlling or just too out of character (the whole pet/Master premise bugs me a little). But This story is different! Sherlock is dominating but not cruel (not really ;) ) and not too much OOC. Plus this is a much more give and take relationship, John submits but also gives back equally! It's like a perfect blend of their needs and wants for and with each other! AND Really, Truly, I SOO mean this...THAT is some DAMN Good Smut! :-D I see a very bright future for this relationship! And I will look for that sequel! Thanks soo very much for a GREAT story! ;) :-D :-D
| MyFirstistheFourth chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Ohhh...I do hate it when John has hurt feelings! But I actually love how you had Sherlock imply that it was just a physical infatuation that would soon pass...JUST to help test and deduce John's true feelings! ;) :) A little bit cruel on Sherlock's part but also something Sherlock would do. And THEN you had Sherlock go and FIX it! :-D :-D :-D Love!
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUBLISH IT
| SoulMore chapter 4 . 2/11/2013
| AnmlBri chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Oh. My. GOOOOD. *gasps for air as she's been left lying on her bed in a sexually frustrated heap* Shit, that was...fucking amazing. I was so turned-on at some points that I swore I might cry, haha. But then I also felt my eyes well up a time or two at how sweet and tender Sherlock and John can be to one another. :') I love how you interspersed the sex with the more tender and emotional side of John and Sherlock's relationship. The two aspects balance each other out and work together very nicely. I love how the story started with wanking in the closet and the misunderstanding that that lead to. I do have some grammatical quips with all of this - misspelled words, changing tense in the middle of sentences, and sometimes being a bit confusing with male pronouns where it was hard to tell if you were referring to Sherlock or John at any given moment; I'd suggest replacing some his/he/him's with names to make things a bit clearer, and a good beta should always help with these things - but your overall writing and the story you wove were good enough that, for once, grammatical errors weren't enough to take away from the overall work. I'm a self-described grammar nazi and a journalism major so that's a pretty big accomplishment with me. Congrats. :) hehe. I would definitely like to read your sequel fic with the phone sex. I do love some good dirty talk, especially when I can imagine it being spoken in Sherlock's gorgeous purr of a voice. Mmm. ;) My final verdict: bravo on a job well done! Now, after reading this, I believe I must go and tend to certain...things. xP
| LBQIO chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
| ValaEnVash chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
oh dear sweet goddess. That was amazing. seriously! i mean, wow...