|Reviews for Two|
| Callisto1610 chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
Ok. No. You cannot end it like this! This is so good!
| QueenCumberbitch chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
WHY WHY DID DANIEL NOT GROW UP WITH HIS FATHER WHY WHY WHY *runs away and cries*
Seriously though, brilliant fic. Although I must admit that it feels a bit unfinished. Can Sherlock come back and have a family with Molly now? After all, it's been twelve years. Also, I need a happy ending. We all need a happy ending. Please, have mercy on my feels and my sanity. Please continue this story.
| QueenCumberbitch chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
OH MY GOD MOLLY IS PREGNANT OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
BUT THOSE LAST TWO LINES DON'T YOU DARE NOT MAKE PARENT!LOCK HAPPEN OH GOD I CANNOT HANDLE THIS
| Alphielj chapter 2 . 2/24/2014
This is painful! Were this to happen, I can so see Sherlock being the absent yet ever observant father.
| Nauticalmass chapter 2 . 2/7/2014
I love the occasional lack of a HEA, the way it twists in your stomach. This one was particularly hard, though. I feel so bad for them both being alone. What a sad waste. Sherlock would have loved that little boy.
| Nauticalmass chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
How sad and lovely.
| Angels-heart1 chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
I loved it!
| Sarah chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
So good, I almost cried.
| pamelawright chapter 2 . 6/13/2013
Right. This is right.
| yay chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
Yep, angst is definitely the right category for this.
| yay chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
"So he stays on his side of the road, unseen on his bench, watching a woman he once knew play with a child he'd never know." Well then. "A little tiny human," just seems like a very in character thing for him to think.
| Julia Ellert chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
Loved it! Will you write another? A sequel?
| noukinav018 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
I'm gonna cry so much because of this!
Oh come on! The Moriarty problem needs to end and he needs to go to Molly :(
How funny, he's Daniel Hooper, if he were to put his initials DH it could still stand for Daniel Holmes...
Please tell me you're doing a multichapter follow up? Pretty please? A plot with John and the others too?
I can hope right?
| noukinav018 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
That is just so sad... Molly hopes to see him and doesn't even know he has always been watching her :(
Hmm what is the boy's name?
If you made a follow up it would be amazing!
| Hazelmist chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Awww that was so sad. Poor Sherlock. I can't believe it ended like that, it was lovely, but did it have to end on such a sad note. Is there another part? I guess I'll just have to pretend that some time in the distant future they get their happy ending, that he at least catches Moriarty!