Savage Ivy chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
Amazing! This fanfic was just sooooooooo sensational and lustfully that I couldn't put down my phone all night. Keep it going,!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
This is a great story! Please continue it soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
Great story! I love the characters and the styles of the writing a lot. I also really like all of the wolves' names. They are very interesting!
Emma Johnsen chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Great story so far! I'm hooked!
It's a maze of jaffas chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
As per usual, a great chapter! I want to see the two packs fight! haha, the only things I could point out to you that stood out to me in this update were that make sure you watch your grammar- when someone is in possession of something it is written (e.g) "Ember's" not "Embers". Unless you are using "it" then it becomes "its". Not sure if you knew that or it was just typos, but they were the only probems I had with this :)

Update as soon as you can! :D

~Jaffa Maze
It's a maze of jaffas chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
I really liked this chapter. It seemed peaceful and happy, despite the setting, but I think the tales really made it. I love the idea of Taica Allmother and her curse on humans-it gives some base to the wolves' culture. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

~Jaffa Maze
Keijt Kotchenski chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
Love it so far. You're amongst some of the better "newcomers" I have seen. Keep at it :)
It's a maze of jaffas chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
I'd like to start this review by first saying thankyou for reviewing mine :) I really like the way you write, as it is a nice change than the usual, 'child-vocabulary' that is used in most of these fanfics. I can literally imagine the scenes you are portraying, which is exactly what you want in a story. The 'blurb' is enticing and unique, and I have to admit that that's what made me read this story, not just because you happened to review my own. The only thing I can say against it (and it is minor) is that towards the end of the second chapter your quality degrades and I noticed a few typos and errors. But I wouldn't worry-they really are unimportant when compared to the greatness of the rest of the fanfic.

Sorry about my ramble above :P One last thing though, I don't understand why you don't have any reviews! So hopefully next time you update you'll pick up some more :D Good luck and I'll continue reading,

~Jaffa Maze

BTW, sorry but which of my stories were you talking about in that PM? I couldn't figure it out so I don't know which one to write another chapter for :P