Reviews for Dark Justice
MusiCSqrd chapter 7 . 5/31/2012
I couldn't stop reading since I started! Hopefully you'll update soon! loved this
QueenPersephoneofHades chapter 7 . 5/18/2012
Wow. This is freaking awesome! I've always wondered what it'd be like if the apprentices went psycho... I guess this answers that question! Alright! I can't wait for the next update! Please do it soon!
coolgal13 chapter 7 . 5/14/2012
please update soon. i really want to see where your going with this story. it's in a word awesome.
Alice chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Interestig story idea you have here. Have you read the teen titans comics? There is a storyline somewhat similar to this, called Titans of Tomorrow, where the team ends up 10 or so years in their future where they are evil dictators running a police state that takes up half the country. It really freaks them out. The evil future versions even go back in time in a later storyline, though that was more geared towards manipulating their past so that their future didn't change.

Your story kind of reminds me of that, being evil future versions and all, though I suppose they want to change their past for the better instead of preserving/manipulating it to ensure their version of the future. Still, I haven't seen this type of story in Young Justice before, so I look forward to seeing how it turns out.

One thing that I'm curious their all older versions and have cast away their sidekick names, why wasn't Aqualad Tempest like he would have been in the comics?
Yuna's Reincarnation-1 chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
please update soon
candi711 chapter 7 . 4/9/2012
wow! need i say more :) will we find out what the mentors and current team will do or think when they find out about this?

awesome story
XXXHells Angel of deathXXX chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I love this story I usally don't read stories that aren't complete but this is awesome and I can't wait for the Leagues and Young Justice reactions to their future self.
asdf chapter 7 . 3/5/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds like it will be awesome. Whose point of view are you going to write it from? I imagine that what happened to Zatana and Alfred will come about from Robin's memories? Please update soon.
8ami chapter 7 . 3/5/2012
This is beyond amazing. You've really thought out these characters and their reasoning well and it shows in your writing. I love the sickly way the team has turned without guidance. I can't say enough how wonderfully constructed the story is and fun this is to read. I can't wait for another update.
Tigress62 chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
Finally! Been waiting for ages to see what happened next ;). Really interesting developments, and insight into Superman(/boy's) character. Looking forward to the next chapter, and really can't wait until Wally's back story chapter.
KiaCoral chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
ok, this 'series', is. TOTALLY AWESOME! XD i LOOOOOOOVE the whole 'dark version' of the JL and you making a YJ version is just PURE HEAVEN! XD i love how you made the characters, makes for a very bitter sweet feeling whenever i read this. *sad smile*

i can't wait for the next update, keep up the awesome work.
KaliAnn chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
The way you rationalize their behavior and mixed in the past was excellent. I understand that watching people die and then further losing all they had affected them greatly. I loved how you showed the animal part of Superman that seems to be a bit separate from his conscious mind. The parts with Alfred and Lighting Trident were also great Good job.
Dextra2 chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
Crossoverpairinglover chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
So, Black Manta down, who knows who else to go?
ShadowCatAlex chapter 6 . 3/1/2012
This. Was. Terrifying. I think I'm in love.

I'm kinda freaking out here. What did the Light actually *do*?

You've captured the JLA and YJ members perfectly. And I LOVE Young Justice's insane future selves. Each of their stories makes perfect sense; that fact that Lady Martian has split personalities just made her all the more wonderful.

I enjoyed Tigress' story as well. Out of all of the YJ members, I think Artemis would have the most potential to being evil, as much as I love her. I have no doubts that Lady is the most psychotic, but the way Tigress seemed to take great *pleasure* in killing her father savagely seems to highlight that(I mean, they're all coldblooded killers now, but I always thought Artemis had the potential anyway. Plus, I'm sure, say, Nightwing doesn't exactly get off on taking lives, and probably doesn't necessarily enjoy it; just satisfied, believing he's making the world a better place by killing those destroying it). - sorry, just my take on it(or maybe I'm just defending my fav character's future self...).

I LOVE Flash(the Crimson Speedster one, but I of course love Barry Allen, too)! That fact that you kept him(and Nightwing and Red Arrow) relatively sane makes me so happy I can't even stand it. And you emphasize his friendship with Nightwing. Despite how terrible everything is, they're still best friends. I can't even handle this.

I'm so happy with Nightwing! 18! It blows my mind. Love the kid to death.

I'm really looking forward to Red Arrow and Speedy's(I'm just going to call him that so I can keep them straight) scene. I love Roy, I really do. And I love his future self's motivation.

The reactions of the mentors to their future proteges is going to be intense. I'm seriously excited.

Update. Please. I'm dying here.
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