Reviews for The Lives Worth Saving
Dhea30 chapter 8 . 23h
I honestlu hope for this story to be continued...
Guest chapter 8 . 7/20
This is a good story the plot is interesting and your story is flowing nicely please update at your earliest convenience
Moonttje chapter 8 . 7/18
Oi, u promised to update,... Cries,... Where is it?
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 8 . 7/17
This story is really good. I don't know why you stopped writing this but I hope you continue writing it soon. It's a really good A/U.
DaiseyJack chapter 8 . 7/17
Update please update
It's a really fascinating story I have ever read so far please update
wintercrystal chapter 7 . 7/16
It's been a long time since I've come across such a good fic, please do consider continuing!
Masterx01 chapter 2 . 7/16
uhmmm the characterization feels strange, very strange... if Someone can put Sasuke out of his pride and every other nuance due his hatred and avenger mentality with 3 lines of words then the canon Sasuke shouldnt have never become the messed up character that he become until nearly the end of the manga, going from wanting revenge for one thing to another being prisioner of the hatred curse.

Sakura was also a tough nut to crack out of her fangirl mentality to get out from it with the same three lines of words, or you gave her a pretty the speech about the ninja live with all the seriusness that you can muster or you leave her alone and wait the life do its work.

Hizashi alive was also a bad move, youre making the things way to much complicated and throwing plotholes with that... and the plan to put a pseudo-legimity for Hizashi to be again in konoha without problems for Kumo is very unrealistic and unafordable... Unless the kumo ninjas are pretty stupid they will not be fooled for that... how would someone pretty weak for being in stasis for years was going to be capable of put a stunt like blast the shrine, evade the hornet's net that will stir with that and ultimately return back to konoha? Is completely unrealistic and i dont even know how is that kumo dont get to examine the byakugan having it at hand... seal or not i pretty doubt that a seal will be capable of destroy the byakugan if someone decides to pluck Hisashi eyes with a strike at mach 1 or if the just decide to blast half of Hisashi head that contain the seal...
Masterx01 chapter 1 . 7/16
Interesting yet i sense that the reactions from Hiruzen were a little too tamed for someone that has seen a man sudenly appear in his office and pull the 'i came from the future card' and he doesnt even ask 'how' or is that the time travel is something of everyday in this Naruto world fic?
AyaEmett chapter 4 . 7/14
Well, I have to admit that you sub-edit some original faults very well. I have to give you credit, I see your patience by adding corrections in the format. Maybe I was wrong to judge you early. Good look! Thumbs up!
Deb.23 chapter 8 . 7/12
Any way you can actually update this awesome story? I've read these 8 chapters a billion times by now! Its still as good as the first time, and I have no idea how! but seriously, you really should update or else I'd think you're dead...or something...
breakeven2007 chapter 8 . 7/11
This is just getting heated up. I really like your portrayal of Haruki, by the way. I know it's been awhile, but I'll still look out for an update.
Shadow Susanoo chapter 8 . 7/10
Guys this story is kind of adopted by "mizuraikage" whose publishing it in the name of "Lives Worth Saving: Legacy of the Hokage".He has published the same first 7-8 chapters recently(10th july 2016)and will be continuing this fic ...
Putikiboy chapter 8 . 7/10
still waiting
EmberOfTheSea chapter 8 . 7/9
Amazing! Please update!
kirowan chapter 1 . 7/8
Thank you for this fic. I'm so in love with Haruki, poor him, I can't see Haruki as Naruto, even though they are both Naruto but technically they're two different people. I always feel the urge to give Haruki a big bear hug *despite the fact that he doesn't want to be touched and I CAN'T touch him* then tell him Don't be sad anymore :((

I really want to see the first meeting of Haruki with Jiraiya and Tsunade though. I want to know how they would react. I hope you consider continue writing when you have the time for yourself, I don't mind even if it means 5 years later, lol. Anw wish you all the best in life :))
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