I believe this is the chapter that screwed it up. You should have just continued with what you had. Introducing time paradoxes and other bulshit only oversaturated your story. It was quite excellent too.

You do know that the "And I" correction was wrong, right?
Interesting chapter, otherwise.

Too bad this fic is dead, as it was goood.

I don't even know how many time I read this since it came out on 2012. It's like my hundred time reading this story because of how amazing the srory it

Here's the sadness

3 I'm gona b so sad when I reach the end but I made my choice knowingly and already I do not regret it.

When you were going on about how pretty Naruto was in earlier chapters I assumed at some point he'd play a prank and maybe respond to haruko or have somesubtle sexynojutsu give him small boobies to be noticed while wearing another shirt.

Damn that's a long ass honkey.

Loved it. Bless your writting.

3 Fantastic

I want to have your babies for writting this. They'll have my face and your writting abilities.

Lástima que dejaste de escribir, me gustaría que vuelvas para terminar la serie pero bueno son preferencias mías.

Outside of knowing you're a retard, OBVIOUSLY Naruto is "above ANBU level". He was the fucking Hokage, dumbass. Did you forget you already had him tell Sarutobi that?

Everyone the fanfic is not dead ! Just on fanfic website. On wattpad the story continues.

It really upsets me that i kbow this fic is abandoned but i just csnt stop reading it this story is just so well Writtle i cant put it down and the way naruto interacts and speaks in this with everykne is just awesome. Absolutely brilliant.