Reviews for Paradise
explosiveking0 chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
i like this book hope u keep this book going i want to see the end of it hope to see more books by u
AceSlayer chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
great book so far hope u make another
GimliSonOfGloin chapter 6 . 1/29/2013
this is very good your a great writer
SoulReaperNinja713 chapter 4 . 10/5/2012
That was probably the best cliffhanger I've ever read. Better than anythig I could come up with. Great job so far :) I'm definitely excited to see what happens next!
asdf chapter 2 . 4/17/2012
Hmmm...I think your story could end up being very entertaining to read. Now that the character introduction is out of the way, I can't wait to see more (: