|Reviews for Dementor's Kiss|
| GinHanelle chapter 12 . 2/3
Noes! you can't just leave it without Tom/Voldemort getting his body back! Lol, I want to know how the potion goes and what happens to the Stone and if Hermione dies (hehehe).
Anyway, just wanted to say thank you for sharing :D I had fun even though it's not finished, but I am used to that by now even though it's still sad every time (er...ok most of the time. sometimes you don't want to know the end).
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/16/2013
| Dragonsrule18 chapter 12 . 11/12/2013
Very good story! Please write another chapter!
| Micheal myers Halloween lover chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
| cheesel0vr chapter 12 . 9/14/2013
please continue this story, pretty please?
I am enjoying this twist to the redo stories :)
| Severus Draconis Potter chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
Please oh please oh please! Dont be abandoned! I think I'm in love with this story.
| Mashkai30 chapter 12 . 6/28/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
| LiAmi chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Awesome story, hope you update soon!:)
| Amanda chapter 12 . 2/3/2013
Hope you update soon i just read all the chapters you have up and i can't wait to read more
| My Alternate Reality chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
Interesting story. I can't wait to see if the troll still makes an appearance.
| HPJ-kittycat chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
Blaise is a boy isn't
| Teufel1987 chapter 12 . 1/2/2013
Well, it's a nice story. I do hope you have a good reason for Blaise being a girl here other than being Harry's love interest. Because otherwise you will be seen as what I said before (and to clarify, not by me)
Harry should have just told Voldemort to let the damn troll in. After all, while he desires immortality, Voldemort doesn't like to depend on other things for said immortality.
Quote:Gryffindor table were all sorts of sugary breakfast foods were available including waffles and several muggle cereals, the Slytherin table offered porridge, museli, yoghurt, fruit and toast.:End Quote
Ok, I know that Harry is currently hating the Weasleys and Hermione, but really? Did you have to go that far? I'm sorry, but that's a bit childish.
Oh, and did you know that proper nouns don't change with the language? So names sound the same no matter what language used!
Now, can you imagine what parseltongue would sound like when you use names?
Something like "hiss hiss hiss Tom hiss hiss hiss Harry hiss hiss hiss Salazar"
Sounds weird coming from a snake.
Anyway, till next chapter!
p.s. Fudge and the ministry workers recognised Voldemort by sight. And this was after they spent a year denying his return. That means that they recognised Voldemort from before his fall. Meaning that Voldemort was all disfigured and snake-like before his first fall from power. And if you ask me, it's conceivable since he has gone through a lot of rituals to enhance his body. He doesn't have to be good or even normal looking! His grandson could just tolerate the man's looks. Sort of like how any dutiful grandson would act around a beloved grandfather who has been disfigured. It certainly will be different from the myriad of fics out there that either make Voldemort a good looking older version of a sixteen year old Tom Riddle or have the characters think his snake like face looks good or describe his snake like face as "good looking"
| Teufel1987 chapter 10 . 1/2/2013
Considering Harry's mentality, I'm surprised that Draco doesn't automatically think of Harry as his elder brother. After all, Harry has lived for nineteen years mentally. That carries a sense of maturity that you just can't hide. It would be really easy to forget that Harry is technically younger than Draco when the boys are together.
Anyway, nice chapter … you need to check your apostrophe usage. Putting an apostrophe before an s turns a word to singular possessive, not plural. So it should be "Malfoys" not "Malfoy's" and so on and so forth.
Also, Blaise's sex was confirmed in HBP. Few still insist that he is a girl, and those people tend to be ridiculed as it's something that was once prevalent in fan fiction (I.e. making him a girl) before HBP came out. People who still do that are seen as obstinate or stupid.
Not that I think that, but you ought to know.
| Teufel1987 chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
You're a bit of a comma whore … you like them commas!
Seriously, though, cool it with the comma use. One comma is a short pause while speaking. So read the sentences out in your head as you write. It helps.
Anyway, nice chapter… though, Harry did get presents during his first Christmas in Hogwarts.
And what does Lucius mean by his being an Evans? Harry isn't an Evans since his mother's maiden name was Riddle.
| Teufel1987 chapter 7 . 1/2/2013
Nice chapter, though I find it unusual that a boy of Draco's age would know much about what colours would go well with each other.
Also, I didn't think it was necessary to go into so much detail about what they had for breakfast and what kind of trunks they bought.