|Reviews for Turning Points: Loyalty|
| Lelouchvibritt1 chapter 1 . 11h ago
This story is one if my favs !..loved it
Lelouch and suzaku in Ireland ahhaha
| val'tanelle chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Holy hell yeah. Popped into FFnet exactly for this what-if fanfic. Glad I found it!
| rajvir chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
This is a great story that I really like, originally I was going to author alert you but when i looked at your profile. (Slight shudder) Lets just say i am straight and leave it at that shall we.
Still all considered you are an amazing author and I will eagerly await updates for this story.
| Gimei chapter 8 . 8/17/2013
Great fic, I enjoyed reading it! :D
| Pandas Are Still Bears RAWR chapter 8 . 8/10/2013
This is one of the best what-if stories I've read, thank you for letting Rolo live (;
| Dr.Wren chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Loved this. Freaking loved this.
I always dreamed a conclusion like this for CG and you portraied it perfectly: how for a single detail everything changed, just code geass style, how Suzaku still behaves like the hotblooded idiot he is BUT gets a clue (I would have kissed him, FINALLY), Lelouch, oh Lelouch, is perfect. They're all so IC I nearly cried. And the negotiations! Loved those, how behind every word there's a world of pianification and reasoning. Like they say, always three steps ahead.
I want an anime out of your fic, every other alternative ending pales in comparison. Thanks to you for me code didn't end with R1.
Also, well, I'm a suker for happy ending so this is my official new code geass ending; fuck the requiem.
| Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 8 . 5/24/2013
Wow this is an amazing story
Please tell me it's not done :(
Sincerely The Sign Painter
| Elelith chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
Lovely... except Nunnually not being part of the picture...
| kimchiwon chapter 8 . 3/29/2013
I love how this played out. I love every bit of characterization, except some off moments that are rather trivial compared to the general, wonderful picture. I love how easily Lelouch and Suzaku switch from spitting curses at each other to becoming relatively comfortable and companionable to one another. The fic was at the perfect length; not too long, not too short. With eight chapters you managed to revolve around, build upon, and emphasize the main controlling theme of the story: loyalty. Never had I once doubted that Lelouch and Suzaku would remain together till the very end. As Lelouch had said, their relationship is indisputably and truly worth more than friendship. Excellent read.
| Dark Naruto chapter 8 . 3/14/2013
i've always thought how ungrateful the OoBK were, i mean they should at least give Lelouch the benefit of the doubt, especially when he had helped so much in their fight for Japan. Granted, Lelouch had left them without a commander during the Black Rebellion, i always thought that the Black Knights should at least give Lelouch a chance to explain himself rather than persecution as in canon. I've always believed in listening, knowing and understanding stories from both side.
That said, I'm glad to find a fic with an AU "What If" on this particular point of the story. And good job with the ending. I've always liked endings with Suzaku & Lelouch treasuring their friendship together rather than the sad canon ending. Which is good too, but the death of Lelouch left me mourning for days. This story was wonderfully done, very good job indeed.
P/S: I actually like your other story: Turning Points-Revelation better. Maybe cause i read that one first and the idea of Code SK & LL appealed more to me. Nevertheless i love both of your Turning Points fics. Now to read the last one; Turning Points: Chess Match. :D
| 107602 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Thank you so much for this entire story. I always felt the Black Knights should be a little more loyal. I love this alternative ending. :)
| TanyaUchiha chapter 8 . 2/3/2013
This story was AMAZING! I really enjoyed it! I loved the way you portrayed the characters. Really well done!
| korat5 chapter 8 . 1/21/2013
| softdreamer chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
I really liked it :D
| snakeofdreams chapter 8 . 12/4/2012