|Reviews for Violet Dusk of Bali|
| DarkFeder chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Your fanfictions surely know how to make me emotional! xD
Also this one was very sweet and heartbreaking. I really like it 3
The atmosphere and setting of this fanfic is very similar to your previous fanfic, but I admit that this is even more vague. But I don’t think this is bad either, because this sense of ‘vague’ gives the sensation of something ‘timeless’.
The ending is beautiful. It is really sweet, and I love how you wrote it. I like this kind of romance because it is really delicate! I would like to express myself better but I really can’t find the words to describe my feelings…
Anyway, it is not very clear to me the reason of Sinbad’s death, but I suppose he died of old age?
In this fanfic also your grammar seems better to me, but, as I said in the other review, since I’m not a native speaker I can’t judge!
I’m sorry if it took me so long to leave you this review. But I’m really looking forward to your next fanfics. You are really good with the characterization! And, as I have already said, your fanfics gives me a lot of feelings. They are really good!