|Reviews for Children's Game|
| dante chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
more , please
| midnightwolf27 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
wow pretty darn good if i dont say so ma self
| Billy chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Can u write a story about percy and annabeth
| erokitsune1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
The very end was hilarious! Great story
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
you are a sick sick person
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
With an ending like that it seems like they had their cake and ate it too (or whatever that saying is).
Intense. Great job!
| joice84 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Hi! just find it now, and I have to say i don't read a lot of stories about Harry Potter but this one caught my attention, I love it! and in the end i do LOL a lot!
so thanks for writing!
| dowlking chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
May I commend you on the last three lines of this story. Pure genius. And it was a damn good one shot. Full marks
| mitch404 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
so sick... do you even now how many children in the world right now are suffering from molestation from their own family member some even gets pregnant by their own father and suffered a very traumatic life and for you to write this story is very insensitive. Please refrain from encouraging this kind of act. Ypu are a good writer Im sure you can find a much more decent story than this.
| vampires-r-bloody-hot chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
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| Daydreamopera chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Omo, so hot ;)
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Why don't you do one with Harry and Hermione and her mum? Update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Great story, maybe write some more with Hermione and her Father or a made up sibling.
| Samuel Duchesne chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This one was awesome, like the rest of your Harry Potter ones. You should try to expand this one on a few others, like maybe a few of the previous times when Dan and Harry fucked Hermione in the summer or maybe a next time without the obliviation. One when Dan and Harry are fucking Helen when Hermione is out would be really hot! Maybe one when it's family sex, like Dan is fucking Hermione for all she's worth somewhere in a public place of the house and Harry is doing Helen in the same manner not far! A scene with a bit of humour, like Harry saying with a cheeky tone when he's screwing Helen doggy style, in the sitting room with Dan screwing his daugther not far away "Wow, your wife is a really great fuck Dan! How's Hermione?" Well, full of ideas! Keep up the good work!
| HaryHermione chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
You turned me on! Can you write more Harry and Hermione stories?