|Reviews for The Ritual|
| naru'sgirl13 chapter 1 . 1/31
Complete and utter awesomeness!
| Yuki Kyuu Aizawa chapter 1 . 1/23
Should make this more then a oneshot
| goddessHAX chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
SWEEEETT. I only wish that part implied ItaNaruSasu was there :) Oh, this is so hot. I have no words right now.
| HoneyBee137 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
holy crap that was kinky.
I mean HOLY CRAP THAT WAS KINKY!
I can't even say anything other than that man. That was just... too fucking kinking for words.
Good job. I applaud you and your efforts.
| mattcun chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
plz write more
| lilyaoifancutie chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Hi I love ur story that I read twice and I was wondering I don't know if anyone asked you this already but would u be willing to do like prequel to this story of doing kushina and mikoto and how they defeated kyuubi but its just a suggestion anyway I do like your stories k byebye and merry Christmas or w/t holiday u celebrate if u do
| roboguy45 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Sooooooooo hot YOU MY FRIEND STILL GOT IT LOL, also I am still wait for the update of Ties that Bind LOL.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Wow. O/O that was... steamy. And amazingly written. That was fucking poetry. Love it. More Please. -dies-
| NotNiceGijibae chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I think my mouth was hanging open for the majority of this fic. Omg... so hot... damn... damn... DAMN! Wow... I'm speechless... as always, amazing! This was great!
| ImaWilburD chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Damn It was pwp with a great background mythology to it. And I loved it. Lol although the perv in me wants to know how Naruto's mother got him to submit.
| SkoRn3d chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
o.0 strange ... I find myself at the bottom of a page, with not 'next' button to push.
This is becoming an increasing habit of mine concerning your stories. No 'next' button ... and I think that on - if not more than at least one occasion I've (in my head) pleaded with you to continue a story. And if I haven't then truly my apologies, for I've definitely cried for them in my head -.
Anyway, point to this long-winded review. I love your stories so much -and believe me that's something considering you mainly write narusasu- that I am constantly wanting them NOT to finish, or at least for them to be succeeded by something equally as fantastic. Yeah (*_*)
| Garmiet chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Really cool idea.
Cool visual set-up. I really want to see an epic piece of fanart of the temple, outside & in. So it sounds like "vessels", in this case, would be a more temporary thing... I like where this is going.
Love that fox statue. It demands fanart! So the Great Fox has a shown gender. Makes sense that the offerings would be "the very best a villager had to offer." like that paragraph about Itachi's relationship to the acolytes.
Naruto's still cute! "Thought they'd never leave." X "Shared the same crib"; "must be as close to him as his own heartbeat ...". If they have sex, I'll count it as a form of incest. Doesn't bother me, but that's how I see it. And anyway, when dealing with divinity ... it's not so strange. I've got a suspicious feeling about that dagger ... it's going to kill one or both of them, isn't it. I'm going to have to look up "nagajuban" & "hadajuban" later. "Naruto was a sexual creature." That line, surrounded by all the context ... I can visualize it perfectly. also like how Itachi's part is minimal, but he's still described in enough details to keep me curious about him. "The tattoo on Sasuke's neck that marked him as an acolyte." Wouldn't be a Curse Seal in the ninjaverse, would it? ) like the differences in how Naruto and Sasuke top, and the reasons why. "His mother had done it before him, and her grandmother before her." And Sasuke's mother was an acolyte. Is it unusual that the Vessel & Acolyte right now are men? And are they always 2 women or 2 men? That's a lot of blood needed for such a large & elaborate symbol.
That. Is. AWESOME. I love that description of the statue coming to life. And I REALLY love the overwhelming, larger-than-life feeling given by the description of the Kyuubi coming to this plane.
I like Itachi's tense thought.
Humanoid representation! "The biggest ass-splitter he'd ever seen in his life." & "A set of overgrown low-hangers." XD Serious moments and then Naruto sees those and his brain practically says, "Daaamn, I'm impressed." "I'll never be able to tame this thing." Don't know why exactly, but that line makes me smile too.
"Just how to subdue the Great Fox was not taught." Probably something that can't really be taught. I'm guessing it's something that only the vessels & acolytes know through the actual experience. Love Kurama's divine arrogance. And how feral he is. "He Who Must Be Obeyed." XD God or not, he names his dong. (By the way, "obeyed" wasn't capitalized, but I think it was supposed to be.)
Man, this is really intense. That bit about Naruto's navel poking in and out caused some very mixed feelings that weren't entirely settling. Just when I think things can't get any raunchier ... I'm impressed. And I really like the description about how Naruto needed something more familiar and "blessedly human" after that traumatizing experience. Oh YOU TELL HIM, NARUTO! Oh jeez. I've NEVER seen Kurama dominated in fanfiction. EVER. O.O It's even more impressive, given how you described him in this story. Like dominating the impossible.
Kage Bunshin! "I am the Kyuubi! Greatest of the Great Spir-" I'm reminded of Orochimaru's panicked ranting just before he got OWNED by Sasuke and/or Itachi in the manga. Speaking of being owned, that's happening to Kurama completely and totally here.
I was wondering why Sasuke wasn't helping. I wish he could. Okay, now he kind of is. "I want him to come in his own face and eat it." That's actually pretty clever. Not just symbolic of domination there, but ... it makes me curious if Kurama will get drunk off his own spend the way the humans do. Probably not as much, but it might produce an effect.
Love seeing Itachi this triumphant. You always write him out to be really interesting. ) COOL ENDING! PERFECT ENDING! And Naruto's fate is left open to the readers' imagination.
Awesome. Absofuckinglutely awesome. I haven't read any other divinity fanfictions in the Naruto-verse (though there was KIND OF one I was in the middle of before I gave up). Even though I plan to read more of them, I don't know if any of them can live up to this ...
I love the world that you created here, and the details of the ritual, and the roles the characters played; everything had a purpose. The open ending was excellent. It leaves no doubt in my mind that Konoha is saved. The only thing I have to wonder about is Sasuke's & Naruto's fates. They didn't sound so great for the previous vessels & acolytes. However, none of them have owned the Kyuubi like that, so there's a possibility that things will turn out differently. And if anyone can succeed at beating the odds, it's definitely Naruto. It never really explained what it is that Naruto sacrifices: his life? his health? his sanity? For certainty, having such close contact with something so divine and violent has to leave its marks on a person if they survive.
I don't know much about Japanese mythology, but I know I like this a lot more than most Greek myths (could be it's because I'm familiar with the Greek gods' attitudes & natures from the myths, and I don't care for most of them). I read this fantasy series by Jacqueline Carey (Kushiel's Legacy, and it's one of my favorites), and this reminds me of some of the more beautiful fantastical divinity in that series, as well as some of the scarier parts. Even though there was no sexual intercourse between humans & gods.
And on a random side-thought, I wonder if it's possible for Kurama to impregnate a human woman in this universe, and what the result would be. Hell-it's possible that's where the Uzumaki clan came from and why they're the only ones with the chakra to withstand the Kyuubi.
| kittydarko chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
holy f*ck. let me just say that no one comes up with as many different ways to say penis or cum as you do. it's utterly fantastic. a gift, i tell you. "he who must be obeyed" had me lol-ing like nuts. and "open for my load of boy honey" *wipes away tears* just. awesome. hot as all hell, and yet hilarious too. and i pretty much (normally) can't stand it if naruto or sasuke are with anyone else other than eachother, but i didn't mind kyuubi so much. uchicest...well, that's not my cup-o-tea, but i am hopelessly drawn to ANY narutoXsasuke stuff you write, so i can bear with it. even in this total au, naruto and sasuke are HOOOTTTT. naruto dominating kurama? HELL. YES. HELL YES! and let me just say that i wish i had sasuke's job in this fic, being naruto's acolyte? talk about a dream come true. i swear, any way you write these two is GOLDEN. just pure awesomeness. and always SOO PAINFULLY SEXY. *shakes fist in the air - in a good way* i hope you never stop writing, because your talent is unreal. UNREAL! and i can't stop repeating myself. look, you've already turned me into a nejiXitachi fan with "take me". wtf? i'm a narusasu/sasunaru girl, what are you doing to meeee? i'll be reviewing that in a bit, of course...after i re-read "save me" for the 237th time...
but anyway, fangirl rant aside, this story rocked. ROCKED.
| DoNotPanic chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
| RobotInTheRoom chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Very interesting, I like the mix of Greek and Japanese mythology. Pretty hot too, especially with Sasuke in the acolyte role. Thanks!