Reviews for Live and Let Die
canaryhowl chapter 3 . 5/2/2012
Forum for main characters:

Name: Grayson Foster

Nicknames and/or code name: Gray

Gender: Male

age: 24

Nationality (include accent if any): American

Spoken languages: English

birthday and birth place: July 25-Atlanta, GA

sexuality: Straight

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): 5'11 and 190 pounds; well muscled; burn scars covering his right arm; chin length, wavy brown hair; and green-blue eyes.

attitude (basically the way the look at everything, are the negative all the time or perhaps very positive..etc..): he thinks that he is pragmatic, and usually considers the negative side and the positive, but he has the tendency to lean more toward positive.

Personality: He is very joking and laid back, but he can be serious when the situation calls for it. He will still try to lighten the mood, and he likes toying with his enemies.

Beliefs: he only believes in himself.

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style): He uses poison laced throwing darts for long distance and a dagger for close combat. Also has a machine gun. He's proficient in hand-to-hand but prefers using weapons. Mainly, he's fast and has a lot of stamina to wear opponents out.

skills (beside their power): gymnastics, great sense of direction, good detective

Power: none

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses): After his older sister accidentally setting his arm on fire during their childhood, he is terrified of fire.

He won't go up against anyone who is too powerful for him to beat. He knows when someone is out of his league.

secrets: His older sister is a mutant with the power to cause extreme heat to whatever she touches with her hands.

Allies: He has an agreement with other bounty hunters not to interfere with each other.

Enemies: Police, people who are against killing, his former boss that he left to go freelance

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision):

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): freelance bounty hunter

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship): sarcastic, desensitized to killing, and adventurous

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): When Grayson was ten years old, his sister manifested her mutant powers for the first time, and in the process, inflicted severe burns to her younger brother. He didn't know how he got the burns, just that his sister caused them, and it was pure agony. That day, she ran away from home, and Gray has only seen her once since then. He survived the burns after a skin graft and after long and painful recovery, learned how to use his left hand as if it were his dominant one. Though his right arm is healed now, Gray was very bitter as a boy and teenager due to the injury and his sister's subsequent abandonment.

He began training and thinking about his sister obsessively, and at age 18, left home completely devoted to finding his sister. After facing several dead ends and having no leads, he agreed to become a bounty hunter for a wealthy businessman who wanted to find and eliminate someone that stole company secrets. Gray finally had a job and the resources to locate people anywhere in the world. It took him almost a year, but he finally located his sister. When he went to confront her, he saw how she was living in the streets, just managing to survive, and he realized that it had been stupid to dwell on an event that occurred during his childhood that was in retrospect, an accident, a mistake, so he left his sister alone without her ever noticing that he was there. He changed his outlook on life and decided to do things on his own terms in order to live his life the right way.

good/evil/neutral: he will work for whoever pays the most and makes it look more appealing because he will only take a job if he wants to

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): he doesn't necessarily understand mutants (what/who they are), but more strife gives him more business...

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples): dark clothes to blend in and a jacket to cover his weapons, but nothing too strange that screams "I'm suspicious!"

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): His weapons. His darts are attached to a strap across his shoulder along with his dagger, and his machine gun is strapped to his back when not in use. He likes to travel light, so he carries just a satchel with necessary supplies like extra weapons, food, and clothes, but stashes it before a job.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? yes

Anything else I need to know about them?: PM me if you need anything else.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: Gray captures one of the other OCs and the others have to save hime/her or the mutants hire Gray to track someone down.
A Half-Empty Glass chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
Name: Maris Dacy

Nicknames and/or code name: Wire

Gender: Female

age: 19

Nationality (include accent if any): South African, with a harsh, noticeable African accent

Spoken languages: English, Afrikaans

birthday and birth place: April 20. Johannesburg

sexuality: Straight

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): 6 foot 2, 160 pounds, lightly, muscled body shape, bright orange skin with ridges along her forehead, collar bone, shoulders, spine, and near her ears, feather like green hair worn shoulder length and severe bangs, squinted eyes of a mud green color and her face usually has a serious, almost critical expression, a small nose thats been broken and not set properly, slightly fuller lips, and an oval face shape with a strong jaw

attitude (basically the way the look at everything, are the negative all the time or perhaps very positive..etc..): Positive, which may be a little surprising due to her usual expression

Personality: She is warm spirited, eager for action. What you see is what you get as she lives life straight forwardly. She understands the importance of putting on a good presentation but as she succeeds, she sometimes doesn't remember to take time to acknowledge the feelings of those around her. When she forgets, she may accidentally unconsciously hurt someone she loves. However, most of the time she is mindful of other peoples feelings. She is less logical and more driven by her passion and excitement. She doesn't really plan ahead and lives in the moment. She is almost like a puppy at times, loyal, seeks approval, and likes interaction.

The one thing she is passionate about is food. She likes to discover new recipes and create delicious dishes people will enjoy. She's usually optimistic, but if she's ignored, she gets dramatically pessimistic. She is very in touch with her feelings and can be quick to anger-and quick to forgive. She lives with her heart on her sleeve. She likes to stay physically fit and works out at least once a day. Usually very calm, she can become assertive when she's working towards a goal.

Passionate and protective, she's a girl you want to be by in a dark alley. Unfortunately, she really gets into arguments and they can get physical. She likes to take risks and dislikes sitting still. She is cut out for heroics due to a combination of bravery, altruism, protectiveness and the need to be admired. She also will stop to help someone in need, and is generally softhearted with an affinity towards people and animals. While she has her faults, she is also a strong, intelligent, ambitious leader who will take charge and try to organize a team.



Beliefs: people get what they deserve, you control your actions and thus what happens because of them, with power comes responsibility, and nobody is perfect

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style). A small handgun, and a hunting knife

skills (beside their power): Coking, identifying edible food

Power:

Compsition/Makeup: Thin, strings that are near indestructible and near (but not the strength of) the strength of Captain America's shield (adamantium steel-vibranium alloy). However, they are unable to withstand the simple household polymer plastic. It must be pure plastic with no other material mixed in.

Use: -Invisible to anyone but her, unless revealed by _(y'know the stuff they use to see red sensor lasers used with security systems), they can connect to a person and follow them anywhere (can lengthen and shorten to any length), allowing them to be tracked

-Can solidify and be used as whips or ropes

-Can disconnect from the body and be used to make other objects. They only last up to an hour, however and take most of her energy

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : Powers: normal plastic, laser revealers (I really need to learn the real name), and rust.

Personal: Cannot smell well because of her nose, a limp because of her left leg, aggressive, temperamental, pride about her physical mutation, and borderline adrenaline junkie

secrets: Sent a girl to the hospital because Maris accidentally gave her peanuts in a dish without knowing about her allergies, and the girl almost died. Has a limp because she broke a leg falling from a high tree branch and tried to set the leg herself

Allies: Your pick.

Enemies: your pick. Probably more sticklers for rules or whatnot

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Bandits, sewer rats

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Cook, in charge of non weapon related supplies,

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : probably an opposite, or someone with leader qualities, another adrenaline junkie or someone like her

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Her mother was a workaholic and her father had an Aspergers Syndrome. An only child, she didn't get much attention. Eventually her father developed dementia and, not able to properly raise her daughter, her mom sent her to live with her grandparents in Brooklyn at age 7. Her kindly grandparents operated both a bookstore and a hot dog stand. She lived there, with little incident despite her physical mutation, until the war hit. Afterwords, she searched for others like her

good/evil/neutral: good

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans):

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples): more professional/less informal and then hiking boots

Ex 1) Dadk blue button up, long sleeves and gold buttons, khaki high waisted shorts with brown suspenders, and hiking boots

Ex 2) A grey, short sleeved collared shirt, black, loose bow tie, dark brown form fitting pants that aren't skinny jeans, and hiking boots

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): A small sports duffle, with her gun and knife, dried meat, dried fruit, sunglasses, thick blanket two changes of clothes, sunscreen, and a water filter inside. No swim suit or sleep outfit, just everyday clothes.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Prefer not but you can, yes and yes

Anything else I need to know about them?: Any thing else You want to know?
Kaishin Briefs chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Name:Julian Curtis

Nickname: Julie (Rugue calls him that since she nows him)

Codename: Alpha

Mutation(No more than two. Must compliment each other. Must have weaknesses.): Highten strenghth and Ability

Age(13-18): 15

Gender: Male

Residence(City, State/Country): Mississippi, USA

Appearance

5'5

150

lean muscle

dark skin(Spike and Storm)

brown Hair two french braids

Eye Color Brown

Other Features : Two gun shot wounds one in the shoulder another in the lower back

Brief Biography (Include Power Manifestation):His father met Mystique in a bar and had sex with her thinking she would be a good one night stand, Mystique found out that she was pregnant and gave birth to a healthy baby boy. She found Alek Curtis again and told him that he was the father and gave the baby the name Julian Curtis, Alek was happy until she told him the she was a mutant. Alek enraged told her to leave and never come to him again and threaten to kill her and the baby with a shot gun. Instead of repeating the same mistake with Rogue and Nightcrawler she raised him as Christine Curtis. Julian grew up knowning that his father abandoned him and his mother. Mystique taught him how to fight and he learned to play the guitar from his music day him and Mystique wa being mugged and he tryed to defender and was shot twice and Mystique once. His powers kicked in when he used it to beat up the robbers still bleeding from the wound and his drive to protect his mother. When he lost concenious he woke up in the hospital and asked wear was his mother, but all they found was him and the beaten robbers and now women. Confused and anger because he thought that the staff was playing a trick on him he broke out of the hospital and went back to his place only to find nothing there, alone and hurt he was found by professor Xavier and he explained everything to him about what he was and who his mother really was. He went with him to find Rogue who is her first born and kurt who is her second

Family (Briefly Describe): Mystique (he doesn't know this) Alek Curtis (Father dis owned Julian when he found out that Mystique was a mutant) (Alek look like Tyler Perry)

Friends (Canons they befriend. Can include OCs if there are any submitted.):Jamie, Kurt, Toad, Remy

Rivals (Same as above): Pietro Maximuff,

Love Interest (Up to three starting with most preferred): Wanda, Tabby, Amara

Personality: Friendly, Quiet

Flaws: Un sure of himself

Likes: Training in the danger room (helps relieve Stress) Reading, playing his guitar,

Dislikes: Being called a parentless bastard

Fears: Being alone

Talents: plays the electric guitar, sings (sound like Miguel)

Civilian Wear (List up to three. Polyvore links welcome.): Black dress shirt with silver cufflinks over a tank top with fitted Casual Jeans and Timberland Boots,(2) Brown Cargo shorts, white tank top and white jordans, (3) Black Cargo pants, Black Cargo jacket, Fishnet shirt and Black military boots

Battle Wear: Think Blade's outfit for the Third movie Blade Trinity

Sleep Wear: Tank top and Long night gown pants.

Anything Else:He looks like Kurt if he was black
The Lady Cloudy chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Name: Lexi Lombardi

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Nicknames and/or code name: People like to call her L or Lex, her code name is Copycat

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Nationality (include accent if any): Italian, she was born and raised in Texas so she has a Texan accent

Spoken languages: English and Italian

Birthday and birth place: May 17th in Dallas, Texas

Sexuality: Bisexual

Appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): Lexi is a taller girl standing at 5'7" with a slender athletic build she weighs around 130lbs most of which is muscle. Her hair dark brown and almost down to the middle of her back, she likes to straighten it or wears it up in a high ponytail. Her skin is rather tan, partially because it's that way naturally but also she likes to spend a lot of time outside. She has almond shaped blue eyes that look a little bit gray in some lights. Lexi is a pretty girl who is a bit on the curvy side (not fat, just she has a big bust and a little bit of a butt). She has a bit of a bigger bust with 36D-cups and she absolutely hates it so she always wears sports bras to make them look smaller. She has an hourglass figure and despises it because she wants to be kind of straight up and down. Lexi has thin lips, a small nose, high cheekbones, and arched eyebrows. She doesn't have any piercings, but there is a tattoo on her ankle that says "Dance" in cursive.

Attitude (basically the way the look at everything, are the negative all the time or perhaps very positive..etc..): Positive

Personality: Lexi is a very confident girl who's always feeling like she's on top of the world. Even from the way she holds herself you can tell that she believes in herself and thinks highly of herself. She's got this kind of a "I'm a superstar and I know it!" mentality that makes her seem over confident. She's spunky and almost always smiling. Lexi loves to spend time with a lot of her friends and she's always been kind of a party girl. She tends to get mixed up in things like alcohol, but doesn't like drugs. She doesn't like school and gets pretty much straight C's. She's a bit on the cocky side and spends the majority of her time, she loves to hang out with her friends and isn't very family oriented. A spunky girl, she's very fiesty and gets into fights quickly.

Beliefs: She's not religious

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style): Always carries pepper spray on her and she can do really any fighting style thanks to her powers.

Skills (beside their power): A good cook

Powers: Adoptive Muscle Memory-Anything she sees she can mimic except for mutant powers. It's limited to physical things. She can also mimic sounds.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses): She only maintains her ability to mimic the moves for only about a month. Can't mimic superpowers. Can't mimic animals. Too stubborn, overly confident. Underestimates people. Afraid of fire and big dogs.

Secrets: That she drinks and that she's bisexual

Allies: X-Men

Enemies: Mutant Haters

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Student at Xavier's

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : Yes, wants someone who's sporty and outgoing.

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Before the war, she lived with her family (which is her mother Lauren and her dog Misty). Her father left when she was little and her mother never re-married so they lived in Dallas where her mother was a journalist. She has been a dancer and a cheerleader since she was little girl and she loves it. Ever since she was able to walk, she's been a dancer and knows almost all types. She went to Xavier's at 12 when her powers manifested.

Good/evil/neutral: Good

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): She hates it, but she always does try to find some good in it.

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples): Always wears yoga pants or sweat pants and brightly colored tank tops.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): She travels with her shoulder bag that has several changes of clothes in it, she does eyeliner since she's a bit weird like that, water, snacks, a credit card, and first aid kit. Plus a small blanket.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Yes

Anything else I need to know about them?: Yes

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them:
San child of the wolves chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
So much to read -.-;... Just kidding. This is an interesting thing to do. So I've got a question for you, do I really need to do all of that for my character, again? Not that it'd be too much of a hassle, since I save my character's profiles and everything. But you should still have all three of my characters, Azriel Absalom, Noctis Caelum/Weapon and Willis Wallace/Wyvern.
Mak8907 chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
This is definitely getting interesting.

I shan't not read this.
Stormysongbird chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
Very very nice. Nicely paced, good characterization and a good read. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Stormy

Does this mean Quinn is in?
The Lady Cloudy chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
I don't have my OC's bio O.o
San child of the wolves chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
Nice chapter. And sure I'll send in my two characters again. I'll send them through PM.
Mak8907 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
(general comment of how awesome this chapter was.)

(another comment making jokes of the fact that ivy was written instead of IV :)
San child of the wolves chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Oh this is cool. I really liked the second part best. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it.