Reviews for Ryan RenoldsLove Story Chapter 1
Tingara Mingara chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
This story is violating the fanfiction guidelines. You cannot write a story in 'you' POV. I suggest changing the all of the 'you' to 'I'. Not to mention that there's a real person in this fanfic. Non-fictional and non-historical people are not permitted to be on stories. Try to fix these problems soon. If you don't then I'll have to report you.
Natalie chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
You should check your verb tenses. You have some sentences where you put "as i start to take the covers off your face" two verb tenses. Other than that its a really good story! :)