Reviews for Still alive |
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ElizaWest221b chapter 1 . 3/18/2021 Perfect. There are no words. Good job writing the passion and portraying Mycroft and Anthea. I laughed reading this. Thank you! |
Kat chapter 1 . 1/9/2017 Very nice |
Kat chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 Loved this, hope to read more Mycroft/Anthea stories from you. |
LadySigyn1996 chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 Fantastic |
maliciouspixie5 chapter 1 . 6/23/2014 You're my hero. Love, love, loved it! |
HarnGin chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 Nice P with P. |
Norwaycat chapter 1 . 5/22/2012 Oh no! That cannot be the end! I want more! :D |
deletedaccount1112131415161718 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012 If this doesn't actually happen I'm gonna kill myself (well... that's a but extreme) |
xxL2xx chapter 1 . 2/11/2012 I really enjoyed their interaction and this story does make him seem human! lol! Good job! I hope to see more! :) |
Eliza Provident Martense chapter 1 . 2/5/2012 I thought this was a very enjoyable little vignette between Mycroft and Anthea - always a pairing I found cute. I do hope that you write more like this; your detailing of Anthea's thoughts regarding Mycroft - her love of his power but also of who he is - is really well done and could lead to other romantic moments. Good work! |
eccentricpetal chapter 1 . 2/5/2012 Hello lovely. :) I'm sorry it's taken me some time to read this. I saw your message in my emails, last night. But I was already reading and by the time I was finished I was so tired. But I've read it now! On with my review: I never really cared much for this couple. I support them but it's not one I bothered about. You just changed my mind. I absolutely adored this. You wrote it in a way that was so natural and thoroughly believable. For your first story this was superb! I was truly immersed in to it. There were a few minor gliches in phrases, and grammar but hell every does it! No ones perfect. Most can't notice it in their own work. God knows I can't. It doesn't make the story hard to read and it doesn't make you get any less in to it. Those mistakes are easily fixable! :) Other than that, your story was amazing. If you write anymore Anthea/Mycroft fics let me know; I'll he sure to read. You've made this couple seem more enjoyable to me now. I have a suggestion: You could write a companion piece in which you detail the day after this lovely experience between them. I feel that would be... interesting. ;) Petal. |
ReadingByStarLight chapter 1 . 2/4/2012 I quite liked your story. I hope to read more Sherlock stories by you. Thanks for an enjoyable fic. |