Reviews for Saavedra
Wind Lane chapter 2 . 3/24
Hadn't realized this story had been updated, and exactly the same as the first chapter, I find myself wanting desperately to see more. There's so many interesting paths set up for each character and the world in general that make this highly intriguing.

I don't expect it to be accepted, but if there's anything I can do to help with the story - just say the word.

At the very least, I hope you continue with it.
23rdHunter chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
Whoa, just noticed you updated. Glad to see this story continued. I still say it looks like the start of a great story. Beast Boy as Slade's apprentice? That's such a mind trip, I'm anticipating disconcertion and hilarity. From everyone, actually, but especially from him. Thanks for posting this.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
I read this and it was really interesting please update!
Jozefski chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
I really shouldn't take such long breaks from fanfic. I might just miss out on things like this.

I gotta say I love the way you're pacing this story and how things are tying together. This is a refreshing and astoundingly well-written AU. Most stories like this tend to be so boring and cliche (your typical high-school AU garbage), but this one is just great!

I'm not sure how I feel about evil BB, though. The idea of turning the epitome of innocence into something so sinister (an assassin? *shivers*) is just so chilling. It also makes me kinda sad. It's like the last light of the world has been snuffed out, and now only darkness remains. At least you kept the essence of his character intact, considering the tone of his scenes and how he still tries to find the humor in life.

I can't conceive of the rest of the gang functioning without the lil' fella, but maybe you have a sneaky twist in store...
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Thank you for updating this. This is an awesome AU I have been looking forward to reading. (Crossing fingers for BBRae) but whatever works. Looking forward to exploring this universe. Keep it up man.
Antsloth chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Interesting chapter, I'd love to see how it all plays out. I'm really excited now!
Dewittypinkerton chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Nice! Great addition man, even with this just setting the stage, I'm looking forward to way you have in store.
Elivra26 chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Oh, I'm so glad you're deciding to continue this story! It certainly seems to be heading somewhere interesting and I think I'm definitely going to enjoy the ride! Great chapter, I especially like the fact that Cyborg and Raven start a company together... And Kori holds promise -I'm waiting for more elaboration on exactly how she's "terrifying". And last but not the least, badass Beast Boy is awesome!

All in all, a lot to look forward to! Thank you for the lovely chapter!
hydroknight01 chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Well, wasn't this inevitable? It took a while, but here we are, with a fine continuation of what was already a very promising start. Always knew we'd see an update to Saavedra eventually, it was just a matter of time.

A fantastic addition. I expected Kory to wind up sticking with Babs and Dick in some capacity, but not necessarily in the way you've pulled it off. The way everyone she's ever worked with describes her as 'terrifying' was just so appropriate that I couldn't help laughing.

Also, I did not expect Raven and Victor to part ways with Mr Calderone - that was a bit of a curve-ball, I have to admit. And I was kinda looking forward to reading about some of their work there, too; I'm sure Rachel got more practice under his employ than she could have had anywhere else, and I'm just as sure that Mr Calderone is probably regretting the hell out of watching them go - I imagine it was they who parted company with him, because I seriously can't see him having any reason to fire either of them; they're probably the best security staff he'd ever be likely to have.

And Garfield's getting himself into trouble, too, I see. Biting off more than he can chew on his his first assignment will probably come back to bite him in the ass. I like how you've set him up as the potential bad-guy, here; BB as we know him is more than capable of being a real, genuine threat when he wants to be, and that makes me want to see where this will go. Pasty-Janitor-Guy seems to have hit on a real winner, there, but time will tell.

The team and I thoroughly look forward to the next instalment, however long it takes to get here. _
Agent of the Divine One chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Figures Babs couldn't just prompt him for a video call. xD

Too bad what comes next isn't a laughing matter.
Dewittypinkerton chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Dude, this single chapter is AWESOME. Not sure if it's a one shot, or a way to spring board into an epic multi-chaptered AU fic; but regardless it's well done. In a single chapter you grabbed my attention and have held it soundly. I look forward to see if you have any plans for this, if you need someone to bounce ideas off of, or a proofreader, I'd be glad to help
necro-wulf chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
An AU. That is what you're doing.

But assassin BB is terrifying. He is scary versatile, especially when it comes to ways to kill people.

For instance:

Infiltrate house as fly, turn into king Kobra; Eat swimmer as shark; Turn from gnat into elephant while inside someone's ear canal.

No joke; I BB is working to kill you, there's not a lot you can do about it.
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Typing the start of an awesome story!
Caprichoso chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
I don't know what you're doing here, but I like it. It's an interesting vignette, and though I should rightfully have all sorts of objections to it (and probably would if it weren't so compelling), you've got me hooked.

I would imagine there's no plan to continue it, which is a shame. It's still well done as a snippet.
Ved17 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Cool story, if you did pursue it, you would have to continue different parts in different chapters-but of course that is just an opinion.
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