Reviews for Legendary Bloodlines
Yurushimo Kagayatake 213 chapter 1 . 13h
Whoever your beta is didn't do their job lol. You need the grammar fixed, badly.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/20
Story itself could be great, but unfortunately it is virtually unreadable and wayyyyyy over the top when it comes to all these older women's sexual attraction to a barely pubescent teenage boy. I've tried multiple to read this as the premise itself is interesting but I just can't. Please don't take this as a flame, it's not my intention. I simply want to point out that the story COULD be great if certain steps are taken
xtronac chapter 1 . 4/18
The story line is not bad, but if possible can get a beta to proof read. There are some spelling errors. But all in all a good storyline
Phoenix chapter 3 . 4/11
One of the worst fic i ever read.
Ilikebedtimestories chapter 3 . 3/21
Whoever beta'd this story did a real shit job. Like the idea of the story though.
dnguyen686 chapter 2 . 3/19
I like it though I think there are gaps in the story I'm confuse on and I believe a rewrite is recommended. Other than that I like the theme and story idea
HyperA1985 chapter 25 . 3/19
I am looking forward to chapter 26 and I hope Naruto gains a new ability.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
I like the idea but good God your grammar is horrific
Ztk016 chapter 5 . 3/9
This story is a fucking disgrace.. do u even know how to write?
it's just another primate chapter 1 . 3/2
So basically any hot woman in the show? XD
Shinixy chapter 4 . 1/28
Sigh... I can't take the grammar anymore. While the plot seems good I just can't read this. I guess I will put the story on "Follow" so if it is rewritten, I will know.
Esya.27.BC chapter 25 . 1/11
Sumpah.. Nyelesain nih baca fanfic, keren juga! Saya mau ijin fav yahhh, buat nanti lg
DracoErebos chapter 3 . 11/27/2016
Hey, I love the storyline and all, but why'd you go and ruin it with grammar!? My eye is twitching while I read and I can't take it.
Percyjackson56 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
This fucking sucks straight ass stop and kill urself
ExpertoftheBlade chapter 6 . 10/26/2016
why are Ino and Hinata not in the harem? I also wonder the same about Tsume (As I see here being Kushina's friend as well), and others
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