Reviews for Legendary Bloodlines
MGStarFire chapter 4 . 8/26
so first you say naruto is a genin sent on a 2 year training mission and then he has to take the genin test lol you don't know how to write
Ilikebedtimestories chapter 1 . 8/25
The Grammer is really choppy and takes away from... whatever it is your writing.
Fox of Melodies chapter 1 . 7/21
I couldn't even get through the first chapter it's so bad. please fix it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17
Holy shit, this is so fucking confusing and hard to follow
Alucard109 chapter 1 . 7/7
there is something wrong with the spacing,it keeps having a full line and two words underneath it,then a space and it made it really hard to read
Silent Evanescence chapter 1 . 7/5
This needs revision. I stopped halfway through due to grammar. Some sentences don't even make sense.
midnightscar17 chapter 16 . 7/3
Your spelling and grammar need work
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 6/14
Ch 6

Ouu that hurts. No generation. Honestly just a bit more chakra could slice and crush than gently shutting down the points to lethality.
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 6/13
Ch 2

Ok so Naruto does not know but he got transplanted Magekonkou sharingan And the vitality of Uzumaki and gift easy to understand the complex way of the sealing and making chakra constants like chains or whatever because his potent dense chakra in monstrous proportions. For now Anbu or Jonin to Kage.
mirrordrakon chapter 5 . 6/13
This is a good story but there are to many typo's and not very detailed... Please go over the story and fix the mistakes
YerAverageTroll chapter 18 . 5/22
This fic is downright shitty, it's like putting a 12 year old with a great idea but a shitty job. Like seriously, at least earn an A at language arts before u start writing anything dumbass
Jay3000 chapter 23 . 5/10
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Jay3000 chapter 24 . 5/10
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I wanna Write chapter 25 . 5/10
Hello Jay3000, I've never written a story before but I saw your story. The plot is amazing and the story is good. But the only thing that bothers me is your grammar. That is the only thing holding your story back. Can I send you grammatically correct chapters so that this story can be better? Reply to me
Guest chapter 7 . 4/28
Why did you have gai act as if he didn't know naruto?
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