this is fucking hilarious already lmao

dat was nice gurl

God I LOVED chapters 6 and 7. The dialogues were so just, so good ! I could totally see the scenes your were describing.
Your Moriarty is delicious, as usual.
The passage about John's particular love for Sherlock was really moving. And I think you found a very clever solution to instigate something sexual between those two. It's not easy to do so congratulations.

You would make me the happiest girl on earth if your were to write a sequel to all this. Maybe Moriarty would be reluctant to admit defeat so easily...
... Pretty pretty please?

Thank you so much!

This last chapter was so much better than any sex story. This whole story was so much better just a sex story. I appreciate you posting this and encourage you to write many more sotries. You have a gift.

this could probably happen!

Well written! I liked the fact that they didn't have sex. It was teasing and oddly sweet.

Iliked this,I liked this alot :)

I liked the sex with Moriarty ) it's hard to find consensual sex between them

Yay. That was a very interesting ending. I don't think I would have ever thought of that. It was really good. Thanks so much.

Love it love it love it! really sweet and perfect for the characters, as usual!

XD good on you john!

NH

I just realised I haven't written a review, silly me! I do love this story so I would love it if you continued it! Your story is something new and exiting i love it!

Awesomesauce!

Pc

~NH

This is just brilliant! I love your way of writing them, all tongue-in-cheek. Your Moriarty is priceless. And I also enjoyed chapter 5 far too much!

I beg for more. Twice.