|Reviews for Three's A Charm|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/22
This was an interesting story to say the least. I decided I wanted to read at least one three-way fic and I'm not disappointed with yours. This was well written and fun. Good job!
| Miss Emotion chapter 3 . 12/24/2014
*hugs you and spins you around* this was awesome! OMG OMG OMG OMG I enjoyed it so much! I'm looking forward to the sequel! HAHAHAH Kaito-subtle and KYAH I just loved this so much!
| Miss Emotion chapter 2 . 12/24/2014
OMG *SQUEALS* fellow yaoi fangirl! XD I love this! Maybe because its my favourite all time OTP and written in such a beaut way! I just... adore the way.. everything! Every single little detail! I swear I love you! And I'm constantly like OMG
| Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
OMG KYAAAAAAAAAAAH! I LOVE KAITO AND SHINICHI AND HAKUBA! I really like Kaito's ways of molesting Shinichi and when Kaito was talking about bending Shinichi over a surface and the pain in the ass HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I'm hiccuping right now XD Haibara is hilarious too! The Tantei-neko thing is amusing and I love how Hakuba was like O_O XD I'm off to read the next chapter!
| OnlyChangeISConstant chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
That was... Awesome! xD
| ReeveRegala chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
I like this...
| patternleap chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
It is entirely your fault that I am now addicted to SaguKaiShin.
| angelwingsonline chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Ok...this last chapter was REALLY confusing. It feels like there's a chapter missing between chapter 2 and chapter 3 - everything changes!
Oh, and you said in chapter 1 that Shinichi had already taken down the BO right - that was why he went "undercover," but they're taken down again here? _
I know you said in the end note that you wanted the story to be 3 chapters long, but you shouldn't skip major plot events to shorten it...
| RoxxorzBoxxerz chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
I've liked every Detective Conan story ya have posted! Thanks for the great work.
I like how the pairing came together. Ahhh wished it never ended. Seriously fun to read. ]
| Kaida-14Kage chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
Oh wow, Poor Shinichi-he finally broke. And yes, I say finaly because really-it's about time that boy broke down. With all the shit going on in his life it's a miracle that he didn't do so either.
And what's more-in this he has more things to worry about! Really, I so wasn't expecting his mother to be in danger. I've always saw the Kudous at America or what not save and sound-like how Shinichi wanted. But no wonder Shinichi was too busy to take care of himself-he is too busy worrying about his mother. Though-one question-where was his father during all of this? Wouldn't Yuusaku be with Shinichi? Even more so if Yukiko was taken? Or did Yuusaku just not know Yukiko was taken or is there another reason? (Sorry if this is one of the questions that will be answered in the squeal-you don't have to answer of course)
Yes, Kaito and Saguru now know about Shinichi's condition and tehy can finally take care of him-cause that boy is trouble and cannot go one day without some sort of trouble...-.-
It's really conserning that Shinichi didn't even notices TWO DAYS passed-he just thought it was only that morning that he left Saguru's and Kaito's home...
...you know, I'm not even suprised that Shinichi got shot and didn't take care of it...stupid detectvie...-.-
I find it really funny that FOUR nurses can't keep Shinichi in bed XD Shinichi really is a horiible paitent XD
Poor Shinichi-he can't tell if he is dreaming or not (Not that I blame him-injuries aside-if you wake up to THAT gathering...well...it sure would be a suprise XD)
Nice to see Yuusaku all fatherly of Shinichi :)
"And if this one friend of yours is even remotely like his father, then he'll somehow manage to make everything good again." -Oh yeah. Go Kurobas :) (Also LOVE how you put Phantom Lady in this-once more-Go KUROBAS! XD)
Poor Shinichi-he just missed the whole invasion! XD Well, that's what you get for being stubborn and and idiot... :P
Love how Kaito and Saguru are scolding him once he woke up-Shinichi so needed it XD
"Oi, no kinky stuff before the first date!"-XD Oh Shinichi-and I love Saguru's and Kaito's responce XD
What a nice little supirse-Gin and Voldka in jail-YES! :)
Awww Yukiko glomping Shinichi never gets old :) And of course Chikage glomping him is great too-Teddy bear Shinichi is awsome
XD Love how Kaito made the joke about them getting Shinichi into bed and the mothers just laughing about it-they so would XD
What topic did Shinichi advoid? Was it about his confession or was it how he got hurt?
Shinichi is SO culeless XD But we love him for that :D Well, I can't wait for your squeal-I love it when the pairs get together-more fluff that way-or somthing more XD
I don't see anything wrong with this chapter-but then agaiin I'm not the author and I don't know what you had planned-but as a reader I can say that this really is a great story! :D *heart*
About the breaks-well you can just put xXx as the line (I see a lot of authors doing so) or just *** Or something similiar-or what I use is the break line that Fanfiction provides. If you upload your chapter-hit edit and on the top thingy where the options are there will be a line button and hit it to make a break :) Hope that helps!
Thank you for writing and I can't wait for the squeal! :D
| Mai-chan63 chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
Dawwwwww, that last part was so amazing X333 Really nice, looking forward to the sequel .
| Sirastar chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
Na da haben Sie Shinichi doch nicht ins Hochzeitskleid gesteckt *g*
Ich finde dieses Kapitel ebenfalls sehr gelungen.
Die sich aufbauenden Emotionen die letzt endlich zum Zusammenbruch von Shinichi geführt haben waren toll beschrieben.
Das die BO nun so schnell gefallen ist stört mich nicht wirklich, die hätten hier nicht wirklich hergepasst.
Auch freue ich mich sehr das du eine Sequel zu der Geschichte schreiben wirst.
Die Spannung zwischen den drei sind bei weitem noch nicht ausgereitzt und ich lasse mich überraschen was du dir noch einfallen lässt.
| icarusdg chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
Its true that there were some grammar mistakes in this chapter (though not as bad as you seem to feel) but it is still very good. This chapter does have a different feel from the others though (or is that just me and my exhaustion?) and maybe a bit rushed despite its length. Still I'm really happy with it and I'm sad to see this end but happy to hear of a sequel.
oh...one point I wish to make... there will NEVER be enough of dressing Shinichi up! XD
| Shara Raizel chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
i liked reading shinichi's meltdown. he's gone through way too much shit for him not to. i'm surprised he didn't have one earlier. the ending felt a little rushed to be, but still very good. i love yukiko and chikage! any chance of chikage getting shinichi into that wedding dress mentioned in chapter 2? XD can't wait for the sequel! thanks for updating this one! it was worth the wait and i'm sure the next one will be equally wonderful if not better! see you next time! _
| LadyKarma18 chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
this is so HOT! Cant wait to see more