|Reviews for The White Rose|
| Ookami x Kitsune chapter 18 . 3/5
You guys have done an awesome job on this story so far! Seriously. I cant wait for the next chap already..it's been a month D: Lol well take your time making it great .
| redfoxgirl chapter 18 . 2/18
Update soon please!
| PAN TRUNKS LOVER chapter 18 . 2/17
Finally find the time to reread this and I'm glad I did. Loved the way Naruto embraced Kakashi in this chapter. Looking forward to reading more. Hope you guys update soon! :)
| werwolf-yasya chapter 1 . 2/17
Фантастическая история и Отличная работа! Удивительный, и так хорошо написано. Это потрясающе.
| gothpandaotaku chapter 18 . 2/11
Whoa! An update!
Hmm. LOTS of battle scenes. But you're really good at writing them, so I guess that's okay.
YAY! Naru to save the day! XD AWWWWWW, he was so worried about Kakashi and even embraced him! Shows how Naru really does love him, even if he's feeling a little uneasy right now.
Awww, Kakashi was thinking about Naru. Sweet.
Gasp! Sakura saw something! I wonder what she'll do...
Can't wait for what happens next!
| lovleydragonfly chapter 18 . 2/9
Awwwww I'm in luv with this story!
I hope Sakura doesn't blab that big mouth of hers...
Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/6
I love it. I just wish you would update faster.
| carol chapter 9 . 2/4
please keep it coming love it
| quiltedcat chapter 18 . 2/2
Really liked this chapter, lots of well written action and finishing on a hopeful note for Kakashi and Naruto :)
| cicatrix6 chapter 18 . 2/2
I usually don't like watching or reading action scenes*
lol, WHERE IS MY BRAIN?! xD
#ignore all typos :P
| Cicatrix6 chapter 18 . 2/2
I usually don't seeing or reading action scenes but the Hidan/Kakuzu vs Kakashi fight is one of my favorite fights in the anime! I'm sure it's not easy to write action scenes if you wanna get that smoothness from the animated version across, but I think you did a great job creating a detailed 'verbal picture' (can't think of a better way to describe it when I'm really tired and slightly hungover :D)!
This fight always gives me goosebumps but I'm always relieved when Naruto jumps in and saves the day :D
oh and YAY for Sakura finding out! :P Must be a bit of a shock for her but I'm sure she'll understand :D
What I liked best was actually the very last scene of this chapter, where Kakashi realizes that Naruto still loves him - things can only get better from now on, at least i hope so!
I really look forward to reading what happens next, we need more KakaNaru love :P
Thanks for updating, I'm sure you guys worked really hard on it!
| TigrezzTail chapter 18 . 1/31
Wahoo! Neji finally makes it back. Poor kid. Heh, yeah the 3 kids are used to working together and reading each others' signals. Kakashi was pretty much the outsider, even if he had more experience. I was glad to see Choji able to help out more. Ino, too.
| Prescripto13 chapter 18 . 1/31
Kakashi's fight against Hidan and Kakuzu is a favorite of mine. I think you did well in your rendition of it. :-)
| Melyway chapter 18 . 1/31
Will Naruto ever forgive Kakashi? Can't wait to find out.
| harvestangel99 chapter 18 . 1/31
The promise of love and forgiveness this chapter is amazing, and thier relationship brings a whole new meaning to Naruto's appearance in this fight. I loved it!