Reviews for Doing Better
otaku03 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
aaaaw, how sweet :') ...i love fluffy-ish fics that end well, like this one. and in which shikamaru likes to take control :3 muehehe ! (smut is nice too )
in any case, wonderfully written.
good job.
prolific.hack chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I have no clue why this fic doesn't have a hundred reviews proclaiming your brilliancy already.


And as there's not much of trully good (perfect!) stories about them it should be instantly labeled 'national treasure' for all those who ship Suna kunoichi and lazy genius.

I cannot say more because I'm still stricken with awe.
Im Sammeh chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
eternal-butterfly chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
This is deep but sensual. You can really feel each ones need for human contact, and doing it in the most natural of human instinct just feels very shikatema. Very well done. Faves! Xx