Reviews for One Last Time
TitleGirl79 chapter 1 . 3/20
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Jesus, that was depressing.
Primrose Angel chapter 1 . 1/28
beautiful. xxx
raeray97 chapter 1 . 1/6
That was absolutely the best hunger games fanfic I have ever read.
drusilla95 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Very in character. A really great story.
Kate chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
I liked the premise, but the actual writing was so unnecessarily verbose that it became a bit of a chore to slog through and I had to force myself to finish it. That is definitely not the kind of reaction you want from a reader. My advice would be to come back to reality and write in a manner people can relate to and become engaged in. I know you may believe that meandering through a bunch of abstract prose makes you sound deep and intelligent, but it actually has the opposite effect when it is executed poorly.
sangi chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
This was really, really beautiful. The tone melds perfectly with what is in the books. You capture the emotion, the rebuilding, that I really wanted to see. The descriptions are perfect. Poignant. I don't know if I can capture in words how they made me feel. Just that I really appreciated this. Thank you for sharing with us.
Cherlemagne chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing.
HGamesFan22 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Really lovely. Beautifully written and true to the characters. Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Wow! That was really good.
jmlopez24 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Lovely story. Very well written. I enjoyed it a lot!
RedJane12 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Excellent expansion to that very short last bit of the book (I only read the trilogy recently and I still can't believe the ending was dispatched so summarily). It is lovely to read on the very emotional ups and downs between K & P as they build a new life together. The tone and the voices are very faithful to the book so it feels like a 'missing' chapter from the book. Beautiful writing.
OlgaNicole chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Feeling sad... But thank you!
volenut chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
WOW! I can not believe how well the stories are written on this site... Just awesome...
nightchild81 chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Oh my. I love your writing. It really feels like a continuation of the books. And I loved this story. Thank you for this amazing piece.
RG2 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Fuckme, you can write.
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