|Reviews for One Last Time|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23
This is so painfully beautiful... Thank you.
I have no words
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22
Wow that was really good!
| karmicsamadi86 chapter 1 . 10/13
This is really quite an extraordinary read. It is beautifully written, with a keen grasp of both the characters and their deeply broken spirits. I think your ability to portray the true depth of Katniss's feelings for Peeta is one of the best that I've come across, especially where she flip flops between wanting to kiss him and hit him all in one thought. I know she doesn't start coming back to life until he returns to 12, but I always thought she might resent him a little for leaving her. Not because it's fair, but because that's just who see is.
| Rose-Writer17 chapter 1 . 6/11
Wow, what a stunning story, just what I've been looking for. It's stunning, just...breathtaking. Thankyou
| BlueKarou79 chapter 1 . 3/20
Jesus, that was depressing.
| Primrose Angel chapter 1 . 1/28
| raeray97 chapter 1 . 1/6
That was absolutely the best hunger games fanfic I have ever read.
| drusilla95 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Very in character. A really great story.
| Kate chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
I liked the premise, but the actual writing was so unnecessarily verbose that it became a bit of a chore to slog through and I had to force myself to finish it. That is definitely not the kind of reaction you want from a reader. My advice would be to come back to reality and write in a manner people can relate to and become engaged in. I know you may believe that meandering through a bunch of abstract prose makes you sound deep and intelligent, but it actually has the opposite effect when it is executed poorly.
| sangi chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
This was really, really beautiful. The tone melds perfectly with what is in the books. You capture the emotion, the rebuilding, that I really wanted to see. The descriptions are perfect. Poignant. I don't know if I can capture in words how they made me feel. Just that I really appreciated this. Thank you for sharing with us.
| Cherlemagne chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing.
| HGamesFan22 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Really lovely. Beautifully written and true to the characters. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Wow! That was really good.
| jmlopez24 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Lovely story. Very well written. I enjoyed it a lot!
| RedJane12 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Excellent expansion to that very short last bit of the book (I only read the trilogy recently and I still can't believe the ending was dispatched so summarily). It is lovely to read on the very emotional ups and downs between K & P as they build a new life together. The tone and the voices are very faithful to the book so it feels like a 'missing' chapter from the book. Beautiful writing.