This was an amazing chapter however the way you wiped out the wood elves made No sense whatsoever. If they are the perfect species as you have described then in breeding would not have any negative effects on them whatsoever because they have no negative genetic traits that would affect them as a result of inbreeding. Beyond that I don't understand how else They were supposed to survive because you said that their species was smaller number and they went into the forest and lived and breed among themselves how does that equate to them dying out from inbraden who would is supposed to breed with then? Withers and witches or villa or other humanoid magical creatures that is even dumber because their species would still go extinct because all they would give birth to is a bunch of half-breed children until eventually Nothing would be left except maybe some wizards or villa or whatever with a little bit of wood elf blood. So honestly it would have been better if you had said they'd died out in an accident as a result of this small population or because they are such a perfect species it garnered jealousy from witches and wizards and or other species That wipe them out or something maybe hunted them trying to gain their power or something but the way you went about it doesn't really make any sense at all because that would not have resulted in them being wiped out. And the reason I notice is because muggles are proof of That. Also I wasn't aware that pair of bloods in magical Britain were diagnosed from inbreeding because they don't seem to be doing that in fact the most inbred pure bred family we know of the gaunt had no problem breeding at all otherwise Voldemort wouldn't exists. The pair bloods just seem to prefer not to have a bunch of children I'm guessing to avoid inheritance issues or the squandering of the family wealth or whatever it may be. Molly is a pure blood and as you can see she had no issue popping out all of the her kids, And I'm willing to bet that the only reason why she doesn't even have even more is because of financial resources. Otherwise I'm willing to bet that the Weasley family would be much bigger than it already is. Not that that's a bad thing anyway, Molly and Arthur are definitely doing their part to help repopulate the Wizarding population. After all voldemort and his death eaters did spend at least 10 years killing a lot of wizards and witches if that lake full of Inferi is anything to go by, I can definitely understand why magical Britain was afraid to say his name. Anyway the point I was making is that muggles have a population of 8 billion currently and how do you think it got to that it's because of incest lots and lots of incest after all there's been multiple Extinction level events in the past that has horribly affected our species of humans and it's almost brought us to the brink of extinction and yet somehow we went from almost being wiped out to have an population of 8 million so clearly incest will definitely increase the population not decrease it.

This story is trash, it’s literally a ball of shit. I’ve seen better stories on Wattpad, that’s how crap this is. I’m so glad you stopped producing stories on this account after 2014, they’re that bad. Literally.

Story could have been great but letting you write it was like letting Hitler take over Germany.

The biggest flaw I see with this story is that you sent Harry back too far. Third year would have been a better starting point and the dementor encounter pretty much gift-wrap a plausible reason the Harry from this time is without a soul. It would cut through three years and some change of the 'older Harry in a pre-pubescent body' cliche and start the story from a point where Harry's advanced maturity is a little more believable.

It devolves into a bullshit at an awkward time.

Underwhelming. A waste of time. Too much insignificant blabbering contained in a single chapter.

Apaan sih, Anjing? Kadang lu nulis kayak habis kepentok dinding.

This reeks of goody-two-shoes. Also, why isn't there a vote for Lily? Isn't that more exciting?

I hope this is not going to be 'i'll spread my arse cheeks and drag them on broken glass, so forgive me' shit

the impossible anger is a trope that I'm tied of which killed my immersion and I realized that the story isn't going anywhere. The slice of life is kinda fun, but boring too because you don't have anything set up. Sure voldi is alive, but there is no immediate threat and everything happening has nothing to do with the voldi stuff so it just feels like the story isn't going anywhere. JKR can get away with writing all this world building stuff, because she is actually world building, this is fanfiction so really should get to the point faster.

Well, I'll be damned! It's amazing! Shame it is abandoned, though.

God everytime I see that Remus and Tonks paring my stomach turns, second worse paring in the entire series. To see it’s hinted at in this Story just turned me off so bad. Guess this is my stop.

That is such a dickkkkk moveeee, clifhanger for a decade is willldddddd

Tonks is only 6 years older than harry. Remus is the same age as james. So that means tonks is like 17 and remus is in his late 30s going on 40. I never understood how they got together

Strong story telling, wonderful and vivid characters, thank you for posting.

riddle sucks cock abomination ass