Reviews for Sacrificial Second Chance
Gacsam chapter 25 . 2/18
Long cliffhanger this
Snowflowx chapter 12 . 1/18
I thought you weren't going to add beaver girl? Let the troll kill her...
ForbiddenFandom chapter 25 . 1/16
... ARE YOU FING KIDDING ME! Come on man! Thats one hell of a BS move.
Squarekiddo chapter 19 . 1/15
This chapter killed your story. Truly horrible filth im afraid. There was literally nothing good with this chapter.
Squarekiddo chapter 18 . 1/15
Hes not eleven! stop making out to be such a damn baby, damn it is it annoying.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/14
Hes been in war dude, stop making him pee himself by simply noticing someone thats made at him. hes not 11.
Frankly thats very weak for an eleven year old aswell.
jlt314 chapter 19 . 12/29/2016
Dropping the fic as of this chapter due to the main character suddenly being hit with induced stupidity.
Using those chains as a battle spell instead of Seko or Crucio and having a daywalking werewolf Remus and Lily on scene before aurors under James' command appear was just too cringe-worthy.
For somebody knowing of, willing and capable of using Parseltongue and the unforgivables, his dealings with Vega were one major bout of "heroes ball". The proper course of action should have been:
0. Make sure that you can cast the Imperius in Parseltongue.
1. Point out that classrooms have listening or recording devices a.k.a. portraits.
2. Lead Vega into the Chamber.
3. Imperio her, obviously in Parseltongue - we assume most wizards will try to evade on hearing that spell's incantation.
4. Order Vega to follow you.
5. Leave Hogwarts and have Vega engage Necro.
6. Finish off the winner, cast the Morsmordre. Let the aurors deal with the letifolds.
7. Time-turn, return to Hogwarts. Leave the room after you and Vega left to enter the Chamber.
8. Tell witnesses that Vega tried to press you into service and left to retrieve something from the Potter Manor as proof of her organisation's capabilities.
Shu Ouma GC chapter 25 . 12/14/2016
Please update?
Mangaelf1997 chapter 25 . 12/1/2016
Thank god this is abandoned because instead of making Harry beat all his enemies like a boss. He made him obey orders like a bitch
Astroman1000 chapter 25 . 11/16/2016
I am honestly shell shocked that thais has been a abandoned. It is amazing and could have been even better. Oh well.
For what it was
Thx ;)
Gwillem chapter 16 . 11/13/2016
Ok, first complaint is that I just read 15 chapters, and you just barely covered a 6 week time period. Very long winded. Secondly, what type of dickhead parent would raise a pretentious twit like Neville? I've attended school with millionaires children, and not one would have ever dared act in that manner. Entirely unrealistic.
Hipnyah chapter 21 . 10/30/2016
chapter 21 horny centaur. Your comedy is brilliant mate!
Hipnyah chapter 12 . 10/29/2016
great fanfiction. please continue it till it's end
AstralGemini chapter 2 . 10/16/2016
origanal age
Rasengalia chapter 25 . 10/15/2016
Please update the cliffhanger is so not cool
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