Okay, I'm a fourth of the way in, and I'm going to give a review on what I think. TL:DR exsists.

So the begining was smart and effective, nice view on the life and if that was it, it would be much better in my opinion. However, the core issue with this fanfic is the Hinny side of things. If you had skipped the husband and wife thing, and just watched as they had a nice easy romance, this story would've been SO much better. As soon as you added the super quick romance, things went downhill. Before they left, they has speant less than 24 hours with each other, and less than an hour after that immedietly they made love. Like, wtf? The only explanation I have for that is drugs.

On the other side of the spectrum, Dumbledore was not this stupid in canon. He was much more tactful than this. Besides, the people there seem to be able to use some level of common sense, and the logical conculsion is that the "if Mighty Dumbledore can't find him, why should Voldemort be able to?."

Plothole, personel Unplotebillity? Why didn't James and Lily have that?

Love the Maruders book however. I always feel like a writer has at least one intresting original idea.

TL:DR Pros: Better Hinny romance than Canon, Maruders Book is nice.
Cons: Dumbledore!Bashing, perfect life for Harry and Ginny, quick romance and bad execution.

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love this story! Please continue x

Continue please

Great story.

I am really enjoying this story. Thank you! Harry and Ginny are growing so close and lovely together it's sometimes breathless. Thank you!

pout I want more! If there's no electricity, how do they get hot water to bathe?

So they had their brooms with them, why not just fly up to the roof? And a sticking charm to keep him from falling off? I know this is a finished work, but inquiring ducks want to know.

Somehow I think Mad-Eye Moody would flunk them on their Constant Vigilance score. They keep picking up the first person they meet.

Come to read a fanfiction, end reading porn ,bad porn at that know you probably wrote that 10 years ago so in hindsight it's not really that bad just not my cup of tea, but other than that I like this story it's pretty good I'll just skip the smut great job I like stories where Harry and Ginny runaway. Hope you make Hermione the same as I see here evil and probably dark,look at all the bad things she did to Harry and she did become Minister of Magic and they all treated him like crap.

Plz continue

i hope you continue this

Então me entende

This is really good

What an excellent story. I hope you will be able to finish it one day. Please do.

If you could come back and do some more work on this, that’d be great.