Reviews for White Fences
xviolettx chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Beautifully written! This could practically be considered canon.
k4gh chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I've read this story a couple of times already and I've got to say, this is the best one I've read so far. I loved eveyrthing, the characterization, the connections... Great oneshot!

I just love how hope/lightning is so tragic now. Plus, fics like this make me ship it even more. Thanks for this beauty!

Hope you write more!
hope chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This feels authentic and believable, so well done. I like how it's introspective, quiet and startling honest. Hope and Lightning are just great characters, whereas Alyssa, on the other hand...
vodkaquiet chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
One of the best fanfics I've read in quite some time. I absolutely love the way you write: the characters, the descriptions! It's very quiet and mature.
fately chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I was really hoping that there were more Hope/Lightning moments in the sequel, but I was rather disappointed by the lack of Lightning in the game...but Hope/Lightning is still the best there is. I loved this. I really like your Hope...
PunkxValentine chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
I most certainly share your views on Alyssa. And since starting XIII-2, I've grown to like the idea of HopexLightning. I loved your story, but my only criticism would be that I think ten years would have toughened him up a bit. I suppose the line that led me to this criticism is when you depicted that how the burden of everything still makes his shoulders shake when he's alone. I dunno, descriptive words aren't on my side right now. I still enjoyed this however.
Phamenia chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
I absolutely loathe her too. I noticed when she clung onto Hope, he immediately threw her aside and continued talking to Noel and Serah. And the time he let go of Serah's hands. I thought of the whole "Lightning" look too
Genis Aurion chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
I really enjoyed this.

I'm really bad with words, and normally I wouldn't review, but I thought I should this time around. I like your narration and your diction, and it's very well written. All the emotions are there.

So yep, I got nothing else. I'm inspired to delve more into this fandom and maybe write my own stories, after having read this story. So, thank you.
FunBlocker62 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This is probably the best Hope centric oneshot on the Final Fantasy XIII-2 section. I think you captured his character perfectly. And I hope you continue to write more stories like this.
hihidude chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Wow! I haven't got XIII-2 yet, but Hope is very easily my favorite character. I'm really sad that he's not a PC in this one, but I'm excited.

Anyways, wow. I loved the story. You wrote in a very different tense that was semi-hard to follow. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.