|Reviews for Inseparable|
| FrostingFlames chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
You know, I can just picture right after the ocean scene, Kyogre popping out and somehow managing to flip them the bird. Moment breakers FTW, people!
| INSTAGRAMcracker chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
*sqeals with delight*
| heroman45 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
First: That was totally a Lion King reference. This story is actually pretty cute. I like it better than the Volkner story.
| SilentDreamer23 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Agree with the last commenter. Rushed towards the end. You mentioned N only once and I would have liked to see him appear a couple of times to fight it out with Black. Otherwise great story. The emotions between them were clear and on point.
| Bronski chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
The beginning was great but the pace was getting erratic near the end. It's too rushed especially when Hilbert confesses to Hilda. There should be more tension. Like Hilbert fighting inside his mind. It should be extended. With a suitable pace, in my opinion, this fic should be around 10000-15000 words.
| mewtwo master chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
| James LS chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
This was greatly enjoyable. Not a lot of great brother/sister fics out there. Most of the ones I've found just have the brother and sister start boning immediately like it's the most natural thing in the world and don't give it a second thought and the author pretty much ignores the taboo nature of it, which completely ruins all of the romance and eroticism. You actually addressed it and had it build gradually here and had them be reluctant at first, which was great. I stopped playing/following Pokemon after the first generation so some of the references may have been lost on me but it still worked great as a stand-alone story. Bravo! I hope you write more brother/sister stories in the future.
| Flandre Nightshade chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Wincest. it's full of win.
| VioletCamellia chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
if hilda and hilbert was a incest pairing, i'll still ship it.
anyways,i really liked this!great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
i think this can relate to real life. if you truley love someone and they love you, dispite being related, the two should be together. it shouldn't matter if you are related.
| Pcano94 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Great story! I really enjoyed. I would really like it if you made sequels talking about their adventures together through Unova, and possibly their marriage. Keep up the great work!
| Have a Little Feith chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Aww, no lemon? That sucks... So far, you're the only one that had Hilda and Hilbert be siblings. I hope to find more like this, only with lemons.
| lolzy lolz chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
the end made me feel real awkward lolz so you likke big huh? lolz
| James73 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Great story you should right a sequel to it
| cheese monkey chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
loved it though it was awkward at some points.