Reviews for Between Two Points
Xthenjazziesaid chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Don't you worry about a thing. The longer the chapter is, the better. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate this story right now. So many people who write stories with their OC's tend to make everyone out of character and their OC ends up being overly exaggerated with how "fun" they are and have no sense of danger or self - preservation. I like that you tried to make this as realistic as possible and it shows in the story. I will definitely be looking forward to the next chapter.
Liliesshadow chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Gah! You must find time to update! Please!
JustHappenedToBeHere chapter 2 . 7/18/2012
You have the descriptive powers of a god. If you abandon this story i will hunt you down and eat your face. JUST KIDDING but seriously i like how you portrayed Altair.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2012
Nephele.Paints.The.Rain chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
Wooohooo! Awsome! I was a bit confused though...she called him ''brother'' wich means she's a part of the brotherhood and then she said she never said that she was...and more importantly he belived her sooo...I got something wrong. xD anyway. next chapter is going to be so much fun!There will be more Altair in it! ...right? Please upload as soon as you can! Can't wait! :D
Magicwinter chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
Hah! Altair dosen't know what he's gotten himself into, but then again neither does she! I can't wait to see Ezio in this! Keep it up!
TiaDalma92 chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
It was nothing near boring. Please update!
TiaDalma92 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
I love ittt. The first chapter really got me u are a great author, DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY PLEASEEE! *hugsSs*
Trigger chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Holy cow woman, this is an amazing read. That chapter was well done! Can't wait to see more!
HiKura Rima chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
Hmn... It's not bored y'know! It's good yet it's still 2 chapters, I want moooooore~ /squee/ I really like OC pairing~ especially in neutral way~ (?) well keep it up! /throw a cake to Altair's face/ I'm sorrrry!~ BDDD
TurtleFeathers chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Bored? Are you kidding? That was so exciting! I was on my toes the whole time! Your chapters are so long, too which is always really nice. Keep it up! XD
Savage Anemone chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Well, if you thought that was boring, I can't wait to see the non-boring chapters! LOL That was bloody amazing! Keep it up! Short... long... I don't mind as long as you frequently update! I really liked the bigger length of the chapter actually, so extra points for this. Basically, this reads as good as a proper novel! The descriptions of the situations were very well executed and had a really nice flow and continuity. Everything was explained properly and that makes it stand out from other fanfics with similar themes, which don't take the time or effort to make the situations believable. In fact, this fic belongs in my top 2 AC fanfics right now! Altair's character was spot on I think, too! I also chuckled at some of the funny moments like her expecting Altair to be lying dead on the ground after his leap of faith or her almost drooling at the sight of him! ahaha! Who wouldn't! I'm sure she had conflicting thoughts: Flee the master assassin or tackle him on the ground and french-kiss him like the rabid fangirl she is? lol Would love now to see some more funny moments like this! I only hope you update soon! XD
Izlye chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Bored? BORED? You crazy? I thought that was very exciting. :)
Alissin chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Hi! I really enjoy reading this and I don't think it was boring, I laughed really hard in some moments.

Personally I don't mind long chapters and you're free to post them how long you want. ( As long as the content is good I don't mind the length )

I like the way you're describing what Tahlia is thinking and what she is feeling.

In fewer words, I like your work and i will continue to read new chapters. Well, this is my opinion and I want to thank you for your time.

P.S. I laughed at the beginning in that discussion between you and the characters. I always like those.
Bad Luck chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Well, consider this story favourited and now on my 'to watch'list.

I do enjoy that you don't skimp over the details. Such as deserts are hot, exersize hurts and assassin guilds are in the buisness of murdering for a living and as such are not, by default, the nicest guys around. Nor trusting.

I enjoy the level of plausability you give, not to the scenario so much but rather the reactions of the people. You have that nailed down which means that no matter the event, I want to keep reading.

Hope to see more soon.
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