Reviews for Magical Land : The Return
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Not familiar with the fandom this is based on, so I wouldn't notice any OoC, to be honest :) I really had fun reading this, though. Your prose is of a really high quality and your dialogue is great. The only thing I can suggest in the way of concrit is that "the slurred voice" is written in the passive voice, but that's stylistic and not a flaw. Thank you for writing x
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
It can be called nifty
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Hoorah. Good.
Miz-KTakase chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Short, but sweet. I like it.
Anime Borat chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
LOL, leaving her wallet with Sakaki. Nice one. This could have easily the part of an OVA. Man, they should make some anniversary OVAs for Azumanga Daioh. How I missed it so much, reminds of happier days.