|Reviews for Please and Thank You|
| LyddieLovesWriting chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Seriously, this almost made me cry. I loved this so much.
| Subject87 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Great fanfic, I'm not religious or anything but I loved that Kim would do that for Ron.
Keep up the good work.
| MixItUp chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Adorable. Flawless. Amazing. Can't say enough.
| ClassicCartoon27 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Didn't know what to expect, but this was really great. CAn't wait to read more of your one shots.
| Jimmy1201 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
I really likes this piece. I Can't think of a better way for Kim to tell Ron how much she appreciates him.
| loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Aw exllcent and touching fic here
| Slipgate chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
That was... a-mazing.
I'm impressed. I love it.
I first read it where I read the kid scene (sort of distracted attention) - then the scene where his mom sees him pray after the mission - then his comments about Kim that make her blush. It was just a glance through - I had a sinus headache, and I had to stop to take care of it before I came back.
Already I wanted to say what I said at the start of this, but no, I sat down and read this end to end, savoring it.
I definitely hope you consider continuing to write KP fiction.
Each scene is also believable. As a child, Ron is reminded to pray by his mother. Later, it's his habit. And what he says - I'll be honest, I used to pray nightly (it gradually slipped from habit two years ago), and you've made me want to do so again.
But the character voices are good, the Stoppable family is good - if kept to inside Ron's house (and his mother's concern makes sense, relative to what you do get to see of her in the show plus her comments when they take Hana on a mission)... and Kim's realization of what she needs to show Ron - which is basically what his mother was getting at.
In the scene where Kim is injured, you picked an injury sufficient to need bandage changing and disinfecting without needing to go overboard on it and lose the thrust of the story to the epic nature of some bigger injury.
Also, even though I'd read Kim's blush at first, when she reflected how speechless a person would be if they heard someone else privately thank God for them... you had me realize just as much that it's not such a simple sentiment and that it does mean a lot, as Kim realized it did. You had me pause over what even I hadn't realized was as major as it was.
This was fan-tastic. I absaolutely loved it. I'm telling you seriously right now - please keep writing KP fiction. I may not always be reviewing as my time has gotten away from me in the past year, but if you write like this, you can bet I'll be reading.
| thebrightside1377 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This is a beautiful story. I love it. Thank you for writing. :)
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Nice tale GhostWriter... nice tale for sure.
Kim's little intrusion gave her insight in something very important to her, and of a nearly lifelong oversight.
I think she's going to be more appreciative of her Best Friend/Boyfriend from now on.
PS: Welcome to the KP side of the fence.
| Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Not bad at all, now I am not Jewish either and sometimes I have to get proper insight so I've been known to ask. But all in all a nice job.
I give it a thumbs up.
Larry (Sentinel 103)