Reviews for The Rise of a Captain
Candy Von Schweetz chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
wow. Genius.
ktd chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I really love this story! Aww it's so cute!
Please continue with it :)
MelissaMachine5000 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Believe it or not, I really liked Tetra's mom's name! That was a good reason to give her that name. Overall, the grammar was really good; I rarely saw any mistakes. But I think the whole thing could be a bit more suspenseful and "actiony".
Avatarcatz2323 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Awesome! I really love this story! It's clean, and written very well! I can hardly wait for chapter two!

You, are very awesome. D

-Avatarcatz2323-
Jayadragon chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I really like this, I can't wait

To see how it ends.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Good work perhaps