|Reviews for The Rise of a Captain|
| Candy Von Schweetz chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
| ktd chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I really love this story! Aww it's so cute!
Please continue with it :)
| MelissaMachine5000 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Believe it or not, I really liked Tetra's mom's name! That was a good reason to give her that name. Overall, the grammar was really good; I rarely saw any mistakes. But I think the whole thing could be a bit more suspenseful and "actiony".
| Avatarcatz2323 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Awesome! I really love this story! It's clean, and written very well! I can hardly wait for chapter two!
You, are very awesome. D
| Jayadragon chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I really like this, I can't wait
To see how it ends.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Good work perhaps