Reviews for The Musician's Remorse
Forestspirit of Thunderclan chapter 1 . 4/4
Awesome! I'd love to see more of this.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
( I'm speechless) ( bacicaly saying) BEST STORY EVA
Zellie chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
You did it awesomely! This is really very intriguing and good. Hope you'll continue!
Freefan1412 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I think this quite good.
You interpreted a few pictures from the manga in a plausible way and you did not drown your fic in personal opinions or phrases that have no base in the canon plot.
You took the liberty to add a few thoughts that Allen might have been thinking, though, and while i don't think that Allen would consider suicide you did still a good job.
The only thing that doesn't fit as good is the last sentence. I don't think Allen's opinion would change so quickly. rather than that, there is now a possibility of changing his view about the 14th.
This is a good short story, especially since it is your first about DGM.:)
The Fourteenth chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
BEAUTIFUL JOB!
Cata-nee chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Why are drabbles I find with Neah so strangely soothing/touching?
Aubrey-Sky-Blue chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
hehe I loved it!
AllenReeze chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Dude, your story was AMAZING. I loved it! Best one-shot ever. However, that author's note at the end kind of ruined the dramatic conclusion and left less of an impression on me.
Badee Badaa Doo chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Liked it, but it was Mana in the chapter that said that line not Neah. But Neah saying that isn't bad
FarFromRevered chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
I really liked it -

but I've got to say it was a memory of Mana asking Neah if he hates him... sorry ; had to say it