Reviews for Roses
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
dbzqueens chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
I really liked this story, it was great for a first fic. You kept everything quite organized, and the story idea was a great one. Overall, this was good, keep writing, you've got potential. Good luck! :)
zfj chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Not bad for a first fanfic. When writing a one shot, you really should focus on one event rather than spreading the event over a huge swath of dbz history. Grammer is pretty good, sentence structure is good. Anyways, nice first fic, good luck in your fanfiction career :)