|Reviews for Era of the Cursed Moon|
| blackdragon72 chapter 18 . 9/12/2012
Interesting story, hard to read though. I'm getting list a lot, need to work on the flow in paragraphs. Seems to jump around a lot and the story changes a lot. Maybe change the font for memories and flash backs.
| Burnt couch stuffings chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I really like this chapter :)
| The Queen of Water chapter 19 . 9/6/2012
Cool. I will wait for ch 20.
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/24/2012
| Big Hero 6 fan chapter 16 . 8/22/2012
So what happens next?
| The Queen of Water chapter 15 . 6/17/2012
What happen next?
| LifeandFire25 chapter 14 . 3/29/2012
Hmmm I like that you have them married and there daughter is there with them. I can only guess at how he's going to act as soon as he finds out that she is his. Isn't going to let anyone around her koga is so going to get hurt. Lol
| LadyOfTheWesternLandsYuki chapter 7 . 3/1/2012
nooo not a cliffy! please please continue!
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
this is a good story. Please continue. Inuyasha and Kagome forever.
| skyrie-chan chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
Not only should you work on paragraphs, because I got lost a few times, but I woild suggest working on the fluidity of the words. The dialog and actions seem a bit choppy. Other than that it seems like a very good plot, keep it up.
| Kyroo Echoes chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
You need to work on paragraphs. I try to read your work and I always get mixed up