Reviews for The First Time
Unvirgin chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Very nice, very believable. My first time was with my husband and it was painful and no one finished. and that was with my hymen already broken. (which was a result of a first time fingering). Sex for the first time is far from perfect and I am so glad you wrote a fic expressing the realities of it.
Ryuus2 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
If at first you don't succeed, you try, and try, and try, and try, and try again and again and again until you finally get where you're going. And then, for the sake of science, you must repeat the process under different circumstances and catalogue the results.

Keep up the great work!
Fangirl chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Omg I love this.
inuyashakingdomheartslover15 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
good good true so good
He who is AWESOME chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Thank you for that dude. KP naked is one of the greatest mental pictures ever. My one question: who's Hana? You said Ron left Rufus with Hana, and its been years since I've seen the show, and with the name Hana, I'm drawing a blank. Great story.
Nyx Calliope chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
This was good. I liked it.
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
CaptProd chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Great one shot. That does seem to be a bit more realistic as to how they would lose their viginities together. Also keep up the great work on Ronshine.