Reviews for Prisoner of the Crown
LostMyPieces chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
This Is amazing! Keep writing this, please!
Meeko chapter 4 . 8/9/2012
I hope your okay, I know how that feels
Shannon chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
I love this chapter, it's very sad how Simon can't see or hear Betty. I really hope this gets updated! :3
Guest chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
Sad :( but I like it :)
jboy44 chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
update soon please
Ninja-Jordan chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
You got moxy kid. It's a pretty solid story, but I can't help but feel like I'm not getting a real feel for the sorrow betty's endured for losing Simon. Also, the inclusion of the Lich is a little phoned-in. It seems to me like the lich would have been something after the Great Mushroom War. But not half-bad. If you get into more detail about Betty's turmoil with caring for a distant Simon,Simon's own mental anguish and real feeling of losing Betty and a more war-fearing/war-torn world, you'll have something great.
Awesome and I know it chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
feel better soon!
I'mNotCrazy.I'mInsane chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
Ah, I see you follow the extensivness if thinking Dr. Princess is Betty. It's a common belief (and probably the most accurate.) Great story, great way to explore Simon and Betty's past.
notalivezombie chapter 4 . 2/9/2012
I've been having Panic Attacks every night this week! I know your pain.
Shadown478 chapter 4 . 2/9/2012
Can u tell us what at school happened, and about the panic attack? You said it, and I dont want to intrude, but you peaked my interest. Oh, and really cool and original idea.
Awesome and I know it chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
great story! update soon!
AwesomeandIknowit chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
update soon! Love the story so far!
notalivezombie chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
Poor betty to be so close to one you love and not notice you. How sad.
RandomFanPerson chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
This story is so sweet! Please continue!
Fioleefan chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
Cool. I wanna know what happens. This seems interesting.
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