|Reviews for Love is Pain Worth Dying For?|
| zombieslovedisco chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Very good. But do you think maybe you could spread out the actions and dialogue? It's a bit of a pain to read it all in one paragraph. Otherwise you're doing a great job! Looking forward to reading more
| myheart112810 chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
Steph you are doing really well for your first story!
Don't give up and keep working on this fanfic and then move onto the next. The only way to better your skills is to continue working on them!
You know I am always here if you need some advice!