|Reviews for Finally|
| Just an observer1 chapter 1 . 5/28
Will you ever update this or is it abandoned
| Slaughter-serpent chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Update please its a good beginning
| Midnight793 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
| Lily Nadesico chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Not a bad start, I'd say. However, I think you should watch out for punctuation, which is rather poor... and I think you should be a little more descriptive in your scenes.
Other than that, though, it's off to a good start! As a Koichi/Emi fan(girl), I wish you good luck and hope you'll continue it.