|Reviews for Attacked, rewritten|
| heavenlydragan chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Jaws: tastes just like chicken!
| Donna Tobin chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Stupid! I thought this was about bob. But sorry 2 thumbs down. Well try harder.
| Aline Riva chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
When I saw this was about a man o a boat I was hoping this would be a Quint story - but only because I love Quint's character.
I read this and it was a very well drawn story, the imagery was brief but stark and fitted well with the images we see in the Jaws movies, when the shark attacks, simple facts like the victim is attacked, bitten and the shark is basically having a meal - yes, you got it right.
It reads well and it's very visual. You do have some grammar errors which do not spoil the story - but its always a good idea to use grammar and spell checker before publishing just to weed out the imperfections.
But this is a good piece of writing from a creative a descriptive point of view. Well done, worth reading.
| Deleted4Good chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Thats so cool