Reviews for Valentine's Day
couriosity chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Yay! Jazz 'n' Prowl goodyness. Yes, I am aware that isn't a word but I made one up to express the yummyness of this story.

Is it plausible for one to assume this is set further down the road in Where You and I Collide? Jazz and Prowl are on Earth with the other Autobots.

Are they sparkmates?
Raae chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Prowl attempting and accomplishing seduction gave me a lovely little laugh! Seems to me like he's living up to his namesake. I also adore how Jazz was pretty flabbergasted throughout the event!

Also I really fell in love with how much Prowl truely /loves/ Jazz. This may sound cheesy but oneday I want to love someone that much! 8)

Glorious storyand wonderful writing. It I had account I would definitely add you!
deadaccount19 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Wooo! Hottest robot sex ever!
CatsPrivateBedroom chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Amazing! Well Done! I loved this!
evilbunny777 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Just found this. LOVED IT! :) Finally, some Prowl/Jazz action. :) I seriously love how you keep them so true to their personalities. Or at least I think so. Jazz should be wild and crazy, and Prowl should be calm and serious and composed. But that doesn't mean they can't love each other. :D You are an amazing writer. This was great!
Chloo chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
*flailing everywhere*

HOT. DAMN.

My heart exploded in happiness when I saw what this story was. I must say, even though I am in Jazz’s wtf-Valentines-Day boat, this story alone makes me feel a whole lot more grateful towards it! 8D

So yeah, about all that hot sexy robot sex... It’s pretty awesome. I will try to talk about other things that make this fic great, but sorry in advance because it’s gonna be hard not to gush about it in a repeated and most horrifically fangirl fashion.

Hmm, where to start?

Even though Jazz as he appears here doesn’t really care too much for the holiday, I was excited by the prospect that perhaps in some way Prowl actually WAS assuaging an anxiety that Jazz wasn’t fully aware he had. Jazz has always been the one who tends to get insecure about their relationship, even back in their very first chapter together in WE. And how totally astute is Prowl that he may have picked up on that? He outright mentions that he wanted to sorta reestablish some ‘pertinent aspects’ of their relationship (his wording always makes me smile!) It’s pretty easy to say at this point that he knows Jazz reeeeally well, and it was pretty unexpected of him to plan something so sweet and sexy and spontaneous to show it :3

Prowl really went the extra mile there with the desk sweep. I mean, they didn’t even DO anything on the desk. In some way I can’t help but think that this is revenge for all the times Jazz has probably done that to Prowl. Like that one time... *fantasizes*

Also, I love that just thinking about his plan of attack got Prowl all riled up. I can just picture Prowl at his desk, slowly shifting from work matters to sexy nefarious plotting. Apparently Prowl is not as immune to daytime fantasies as one might think!

Speaking of, Prowl’s aloofness about the whole thing and Jazz’s subsequent bewilderment totally had me cracking up. It’s pretty hard to catch Jazz by surprise! Prowl might think himself a terrible liar, but he sure can saunter around his true intentions without giving anything away. This whole scene felt very playful, but like a Prowl type of playful where he is smug and seductive and completely in control. And DAMN is it hot!

Completely irrelevant, but is this the first time Prowl has been on top the whole time? Actually that’s not all that irrelevant I guess, because it just shows how much Prowl is taking control of the situation. Every other time they have a moment I think it’s Jazz who inevitably ends up on top, and it’s doubly interesting that Jazz didn’t even try to flip their positions (though he certainly did think about it at one point! 8D)

And Prowl sure is a saucy mech, isn’t he! Holy hells, he’s really enjoying himself!

I like that Jazz keeps looking for an explanation for the encounter, if only because it kept reminding me that Prowl actually DID have a point to it that wasn’t really about Valentine’s Day at all. What with all the steaminess of the moment, it was awfully easy to forget the curious spontaneity of the encounter.

And all that steamy eye contact, DAMN! 8D It hurts in my general chest area to know that WE Jazz and Prowl might never get to experience that type of intimacy again. I mean, that was seriously some intense, smouldering eye contact, and stuff like that is a big way to feel connected and close to someone. Although I suppose interfacing itself involves literally connecting to another being, but, y’know... different type of connection. And they seemed to vastly enjoy taking advantage of it here. They must be sorely missing it now... :(

As always, I love all the little mentions of physical closeness that feel as though they surpass even intimacy itself and go straight into the metaphysical. They share such a natural connection, shown in the way their sparks instinctually reach out to each other and their armor shifts to bring them closer. Even without a spark bond, their connection to each other feels incredibly deep. It is humbling and utterly, unashamedly passionate and sensual beyond simple eroticism.

Because yeah, WOW. It’s way easy to sympathize with Jazz’s speechlessness after that... even reading it was totally mind-blowing! I’m amazed Prowl was able to recover so quickly, although I’ll bet he’s had plenty of practice ;P (btw 1 for using ‘unflappable’ in a fanfic. One of my favorite words!)

I keep going back to that line in WE about Prowl not being a romantic, but when he gets in the right mindset... wow. I don’t know, I still think he really is one at spark. Not an overtly obvious one, but apparently his mind works that way occasionally and isn’t that enough? Romantics in the conventional sense can be somewhat frightening anyway, so maybe it’s for the best that Prowl isn’t like that. And heck, not that he wouldn’t enjoy all the spontaneous interfacing but I can’t imagine Jazz enjoying being smothered by an overbearing lover. I’ll bet the fact that Prowl operates by his own schedule makes Jazz want him even more :3

So yeah, I heart this story. Months later I STILL have not gotten over how wonderfully satisfying it is it is, even just for some random PxJ funtimes fanfic. Can I send it candygrams or something? Like maybe an edible arrangement? It needs to know how awesomely sexy it is!
Atsadific chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Classic. All Jazz wants out of Valentine's Day is a viable excuse to jump Prowl in his office XD That's so delightfully Jazz. I also like that you've not made him all super-happy excited about ye olde V-Day like most people in the fandom seem to think he would be. ... This may be fuelled in large part by your own feelings towards the day, but nevertheless, it's quirky ;)

Bahah, or hacking the television networks and forcing the country into watching counter-intuitive Valentine's films? It's pure genius. Don't you just wish you could do that? 8D

Prowl is LOCKING THE DOOR. Jazz, you are in for a treat.

HE DID A DESK SWEEP. Great Scot! Prowl's gone mad!

:D Prowl is telling Jazz off for being noisy. Awesome. Not that Jazz is embarrassed about it... he's Jazz. I do spare a thought for the poor sap in the office next to his. Hee. And of course Prowl's made sure he can't embarrass himself in a like manner. Oh, I do adore Prowl XD

Well. That was intense.

"A position he failed to move from on account that his mind had just been blown". 8D

Yowza. Prowl is so cute; I love the point he was trying to make. And the fact that he makes it clear this will not become a more frequent occurence (much to Jazz's dismay, I'm sure!). Awesome Valentine's Day for them! (And hot, too...)
Fianna9 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I don't really celebrate Valentine's day, and I like Jazz's views on Valentine's Day, especially the part about hacking "My Bloody Valentine" onto the airwaves. The interaction between Jazz and Prowl was very well written.
UsagiLovesDuochan chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
*snickers* Oh this was a very nice little piece of fanfic. I liked especially the irony of the fact that while Jazz and Prowl both do not see a lot of use for that human holiday, they still DID acknowledge and consume at this time. XD

Though I really liked Prowl's explanation at the end. Love should not be valued just once a year. It's for the lovers to choose time and place and of course they could do it as often as they would like.

Anyway, while I am not that much a fan of V-day myself, I do tend to like mush and hotness all time the year, so I enjoyed this little story greatly. A well done job indeed.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\
femme4jack chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Prowl's oh so deliberately planned spontaneity is just the sexiest thing ever. He is, of course, the tactical genius of HAWT. Love this SO much.
Lecidre chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Goodness, this sexy one-shot nearly ruined my laptop. The old machine could barely handle the hot air and high temperature emitting from all this amazing robot sex bonus story. Your version of Prowl and Jazz are always this attractive, and you always know how to make them even more hotter in this kind of 'delicious' stuff. Now I'm wondering why can't everyday be Valentine's Day, because we would have plenty of reasons and excuses to force you write some more hot, sexy robot smut for us. XD

I don't really like the way people celebrate Valentine's Day nowadays because the occasion seems more and more like a combination of a series of consumerist-driven activities. It's like your love means nothing if you don't buy some expensive flowers/presents for your lover or have a romantic dinner together in an expensive restaurant on this special ocaasion. So I can totally understand Jazz's doubts when he analyzed the true meaning behind Valentine's Day.

Then here came our favorite part. Steaming, hot robot sex FTW! :D

Really, I didn't know that boring Prowl could be this... creative. I didn't know he could be this 'romantic' when he decided to initiate this love session. And boy, he actually planned everything perfectly! He even calculated every detail thoroughly beforehand, such as how to throw that data pad to distract Jazz and how to pounce on his surprised lover at the right time after getting rid of all the obstacles on Jazz's desk. If Prowl were human, I bet he would do an excellent job on the proposal part. Nothing would go wrong, and he would ensure he covers all the bases when he plans something like that. Who can refuse him? No wonder Jazz loves him this much, the stoic tactician is reliable and caring and affectionate, and he can also surprise his lover using his typical endearing charms.

Anyway, this lovely one-shot is as wonderful as your other stories. It's impossible not to love your works! You're simply amazing beyond words, hon. You rock! :D
Daklog73 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Can never have enough random Jazz/Prowl hotness!

I agree with Prowl at the end. ANY day is a day to show your affection, not just a silly holiday that we say you need to on.

Fun, sexy little chapter here, loved reading it!
KageOkami666 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I have not shown your fics enough love recently. (Bad Kage reading with out reviewing, bad!)

When I receive the email about your updates I always get so excited and for good reason another magnificent story.

Would you mind if I recommend this and your other works to the ladies at Live Journal's Prowl & Jazz community
Farky-fark and the Munky Bunch chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Wow. Wish someone would say something like that to me. I'm not a fan of Valentine's Day either, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy reading about the reaction to it that these two have. Your writing is always amazing and is able to evoke a lot of emotion; I admire that greatly.
Camfield chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
GUH! Hot! Hot! Hot! LAWD!

I have to say, the only reason I like V-day is because I can give out inappropriate Valentines (Cappitron's Romanceformers), but I can get into ANY excuse that gives delish roboPorn. Seriously.

SOOOO much an awesome story. SOOO much!
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