Reviews for Deus Ex Machina
thelexy chapter 17 . 8/15/2014
I'm glad to see you back. I loved the chapter.
dscamfan chapter 17 . 8/15/2014
Excellent chapter, weaving the multiple story-lines together with vivid action sequences. Cliffhangers are exciting as long as the next chapter is not too long in coming! Your portrayal of Cameron and John are interesting. Cameron is not human, and you do not try to make her such. She is focused, driven but not without a somewhat dry sense of humor. John is developing into a leader, facing a myriad of challenges with ample opportunity to impress or fail. Looking forward to the continuation of your story.
tomorrowsproblems chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
I love where this story is heading. Keep up the great work.
scaryrobots chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
Nice chapter.
JasonVUK chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
XD OMFG YOU UPDATED! And it's EPIC! :D

:O Oh man! So much heroism, and bestrayal and drama.

"things about to get kinky" :I XD Oh Derek what the hell?

:I I was thinking the same thing to be honest

D8 I hope Cam will be okay XD SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!
thelifeeater chapter 16 . 7/9/2014
Love the story. Wish there were more.
dp chapter 16 . 4/17/2014
Excellent. Can't wait for the assault.
jashykins chapter 16 . 3/23/2014
Sarah being crucified...that was intense to say the least.

Very well written as always. Will have to find time to re-read the chapters now that you've revised them.
supercode chapter 16 . 2/14/2014
I'm glad you were finally able to update! Hope to read the next chapter soon!
biaslord chapter 16 . 2/11/2014
Can I just say thank you so very much for updating. I've been waiting for this for a long time and it was a great chapter. I am so eager for the next chapter cause damn i need more.
yetikiller chapter 16 . 2/10/2014
Truly epic chapter.
elicit chapter 16 . 2/10/2014
This chapter was excellent as always. Great to see you posting once again.
CommanderSP chapter 16 . 2/9/2014
That ending was very cool. Please update soon.
JasonVUK chapter 16 . 2/9/2014
8O Wow! Amazing! There's so much happening! I hope Kyle will be okay :( and Sarah.

Damn you Ellison 8C
xxvoxx chapter 16 . 2/9/2014
Dude this was so awesome!

I totally forgot how great these characters are! Please let me know if you're going to be updating again soon. I'm in need of quality writing like this.
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